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Discussion in 'General Discussion' started by brainlord, Jan 21, 2009.

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  1. sinthetik

    sinthetik Member

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    mac and dude was alright, but for you who dont know of immortal technique, or even if you do, these are called punch lines http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=94y6FVyZs58
    make sure you listen to the very last line.
     
  2. brainlord

    brainlord Senior Member

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    ahh i think the other guy was flowing better than immortal i dont know it aint all about punch lines to me.

    alright alright, now that we've heard some punchlines, how do you make a good one?
     
  3. RekoFromGeico

    RekoFromGeico Senior Member

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    lol, punchlines cant come immediately. some punchlines takes days to think of if their real ill... like if i came up with somethin off the top of the head kinda like...

    so so imma keep my mojo
    and flows cold like my throats froze in a choke hold//

    or like...

    like me, flows nasty like a blowed nose
    im off chillin wit 4 hoes, n they have no clothes//


    those were both off the top of the head, and not that raw. it just really depends, it takes practice.
    start off wit easy punchlines.. somethin like..

    none of you nothing but haters
    but battle me, ill shred you like paper//

    its really just an improving type of thing.
    just gotta keep practicing, and you need a sence of humor... lol
     
  4. Steelc

    Steelc Member

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    Rapping is like a gift. I've been freestyling since like 6th grade. I don't do it much anymore now, just from time to time when I feel like it and have a decent instrumental to flow to, or if someone is throwin' down a beat on the desk or something. I always try to freestyle to slower songs but it's hard as hell. When I get all crunk and shit on a dope beat it's easy to kill it. It's just really easy to start out in a group taking turns whenever someone stops. That's how I started out. I started rollin' solo a while back. It's easier that way to get better. There's always a state of mind you gotta be in to be real dope, people who can freestyle on the spot are cool I guess, but I tried to just do it and I kinda lost inspiration for new stuff.

    Basically the ghetto way to get better is just start chillin' with some other people who like to freestyle. Make sure you at least like their style. I've known some wannabes who think they're hard and try to amaze people who know nothing about freestyling. You know you're better when you can say it was "alright". You know you can do better, don't "try" to do better. Just do it. Freestyling is the best way to get better. I don't go by any book. I don't try to purposely impress anyone, I just do what I do and people love it. I still remember when I had been getting known in Junior High and there would be people I don't even know surrounding me when I was flowin'. When the teachers would break up the huge crowd I remember hearing "that boy can freestyle" from the girls and other stuff from the guys. Just don't try to be anyone.
     
  5. JudgeWizely

    JudgeWizely Senior Member

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    I like the advice here, ive been writing rhymes for a while now, look back on my early ones and there wack as fuck. But now I believe ive reached a pretty good level using mutilies (think thats how its spelt), punchlines and the occasional pun. So ive recently starting recording my shit, im using a singstar mic (suprisingly better than my previous mic) but i dont care cause im gully. Anyways if theres any other guys on the forum that fancy themselfs as mc illd be more then eager to get together on a song and just send the verse via e mail n so forth. hit me up if your interested peace
     
  6. RekoFromGeico

    RekoFromGeico Senior Member

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  7. JudgeWizely

    JudgeWizely Senior Member

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    They any good?
    I saw this mic yesterday, its was golden. It was about 60 aussie dollars (not that the price matter, was gonna rack it) but I still didnt know if it would be any good, plus I dont have a mic stand or any of that shit
     
  8. JudgeWizely

    JudgeWizely Senior Member

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    Last edited: Jan 22, 2009
  9. RekoFromGeico

    RekoFromGeico Senior Member

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    the mic i sent u the link of, sounds like a studio mic.
     
  10. brainlord

    brainlord Senior Member

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    i recently got into recording a couple months ago, a buddy and i pulled some money together and bought like this protools bundle deal from guitar center. I dont know if anybody knows about reverbs or compression but send me a pm if you do. but yeah anyway the quality is great, ill post a pic of our set up in a minute.
     
  11. JudgeWizely

    JudgeWizely Senior Member

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    protools aye. I use audacity cause its free, it somewhat fufilled my needs but today as i was trying to record some shit it became a bitch. I normally just open the instrumental I wanna use, press record listen to the instrumental in my head phones and then start spitting when its the right time, do the whole thing in one and start over again if i do anything wrong. But today the fucking instrumental didnt start playing when I pressed record. Couldnt figure out what happened. I tried to manually sync it but audacitys a bitch and I have very little patience
     
  12. brainlord

    brainlord Senior Member

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  13. JudgeWizely

    JudgeWizely Senior Member

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    Very minimalistic with the red cross in the middle (my attempt at sarcasm)
     
  14. deCode

    deCode New Member

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    well i ve ben rappin fo about 7years now..so herez some shit i wrote

    Im a mind fuck
    Give me A Orange Clock to wind up
    Pull out a gun an start shooting with my eyes shut
    Its beautiful music just lisning to my nine bust
    An the screams in the back round
    Scared the white people so much they left this place another black town
    Every body scatters when they hear that gat sound
    50 says get up an I’m here so you get smacked down
    im heavily medicated
    Its like I living in an insane asylum
    Mentally I’ve already demonstrated theirs no one as insane as I am
    Motha fucka looked at me the wrong way
    You put your self in harms way so now im ripen off your arm an leg
    No matter were you go you aren’t safe
    My mind is trapped in a dark place
    Fuck a wish bone I just pull apart legs
    Hopefully I get the bigger half
    So I can wish for death an pull the trigger fast
    My thoughts are giving me head wounds
    Hopefully this works out so I can be dead soon
    I just let my gun blaze that’s my fungshway
    of making this place a red room I jus let the lead zoom
    an watch it paint I know its giving you a nauseous face
    its easy living life with a costless taste
     
  15. deCode

    deCode New Member

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    the psycho's sick I get my dogs straight from michael vick
    my rifle's lit so I can get ur american ideal hit
    despiteful shit shoot you up so much, looks like you got lipoed quick
    let the maestro flip im a super computer, compared to me ur like a microchip


    im jus burnen up, I spit flames murder in a cup, I sip brains
    any further I’ll erupt an dish blades an make you go back to your bitch faze
    you'll probably switch names punk you like charley merffy did to rick james
    numb your speech like you drip cane my words inflict pain so let the shit drain
     
  16. TylerDurden

    TylerDurden Elite Member

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    Aiyyo, camouflage chameleon,
    ninjas scalin your buildin
    No time to grab the gun they already got your wife and children
    A hit was sent, from the president, to rage your residence
    Because you had secret evidence,
    and documents
    On how they raped the continents,
    and it’s the prominent dominant islamic, asiatic black hebrew
    The year two thousand and two,
    the battle’s filled with the Wu
    Six million devils just died
    from the bubonic flu
    Or the ebola virus,
    under the reign of king cyrus
    You can see the weakness of a man right through his iris
    Un-loyal snakes get thrown in boilin lakes
    Of hot oil,
    it boils your skin, chickenheads gettin slim
    Like olive oyl,
    only plant the seed deep inside fertile soil
    Fortified with essential, vitamin and mineral
    Use the sky for a blanket, stuffin clouds inside my pillow
    Rollin with the lands, the tribe’s a hundred and forty four thousand chosen
    Protons electrons always cause explosions
     
  17. La Coka Nostra

    La Coka Nostra Elite Member

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    dope little closet booth.


    here's what i'm fucking with...or was fucking with.
    i still have all the equipment...just nowhere to put it.

    Tascam US-144 audio interface
    Presonus Tube Pre single channel mic preamp
    MXL 2010 condenser microphone
    Cubase LE (software)


    i hope to be able to record again some day soon.
    click the links in the sig.
     
  18. brainlord

    brainlord Senior Member

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    what does the mic preamp do?

    hell yeah 7 years? man i dont think im even at 2 but i love the whole progression process and hearing the improvement from each track
    anybody know what im saying?
     
  19. JudgeWizely

    JudgeWizely Senior Member

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    "Quick tags, excentric pieces n rough throw ups
    no beef with the pigs, nah just dough nuts"
    2 bars from a graff song I wrote
     
  20. AoAssis

    AoAssis Elite Member

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    I don't know anything about rapping but I know X3's suck. X1's are the best of the 3.