no coz if u look at that, it seems to be going out of structure. the bars don't make sense in that fold's flow. the line goes from thin to wide, then into a little triangle edge at the bottom, and then goes up getting wider then thinner. unless! the N's 3rd bar on the rightis going down BEHIND the middle diagonal bar. that would be fine and works. but then the little horizontal line he put at the bottom of the fold wouldn't make sense
im with you on the fatness of the a and e phil. but as for the N i was just trying to make it look a little weird and step out of my comfort zone a bit