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Discussion in 'Toys forum' started by Denz_one, Jul 11, 2005.

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  1. Stussy

    Stussy Senior Member

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    any crits besides it being not philly
     
  2. smooth_nuts

    smooth_nuts Elite Member

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    dont make it go to a vanishing point,kill the arrow and make the z more zish so i doesnt look like an o haha
     
  3. Ink me

    Ink me Senior Member

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    Haha....Didnt I tell you :)
     
  4. a4w.dinak

    a4w.dinak Member

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  5. a4w.dinak

    a4w.dinak Member

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    id change the extensions and make ur letters the same size
     
  6. a4w.dinak

    a4w.dinak Member

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  7. a4w.dinak

    a4w.dinak Member

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    i like the one without the black on it
     
  8. weakfingers

    weakfingers Elite Member

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  9. a4w.dinak

    a4w.dinak Member

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    (pharm 1) thats dope, i like the spot too.
     
  10. Ink me

    Ink me Senior Member

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    Weakfingers- Does it say Skwint? You need to work on some letter structure......That "K" is killing me. Along with the "W". In all honesty you should throw that tag out all together and start on something good. And hopefully you didnt put it out on the street....
     
  11. flowtag

    flowtag Member

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    okay question here. I'm really toy so am i still expected to give crits? Its not that i dont want to its just that i dont wanna screw up someone else's tag cuz im a toy...
     
  12. klic

    klic Elite Member

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    flow - yes you are, just because your really toy doesnt mean that you dont have an idea of what looks good and what looks like crap

    [Broken External Image]:http://i430.photobucket.com/albums/qq26/klic1/2-5.jpg
    i hit the same thing up last week and when i returned it was buffed, so i guess that means sharpie fine tips = shit haha
    anyways, it turned out pretty bad but it was my first time using the marker

    skwint - bring the letters closer together, work on giving them some flow

    mike - good editing, not really feeling the arrow for the I

    rayz - basically what smooth said, dont connect them all at the bottom, i wouldnt have guessed that was a z and dont make the bottom right bar of your R come up again

    crits please
     
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  13. smooth_nuts

    smooth_nuts Elite Member

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    bump,not an arrow,just made the top bar come to a point like an arrow,what evers...
     
  14. Mr yarbles

    Mr yarbles Elite Member

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    Not bad pretty good
    I kinda don't like your e but it's good
    If people hate on your m tell them to shut their fucking mouths
    You have my permission :)
    Oh and I like the arrow I
    I pull that every once in a while

    oh and shpel your a good cat I can tell you took my crits to heart bro good job
    It looks waaaaaaaay better now

    Just work on your s a little more theres some dead space there and make your h just a liiiiiiiiiittle bit wider

    Computers broke so I wont be postin flicks for at least 2 weeks
    I'll try and get in here to help you guys out I'm always down to help somebody

    Just remember fools give crits to get them
     
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  15. mekosbc

    mekosbc Senior Member

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    im no tryin to start beef or any thing... im guessing your changin to name to ANOER??? when i writer noer...just dont bite... yah digg?
    from what i see you have potential......
     
  16. smooth_nuts

    smooth_nuts Elite Member

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    haha,word yarbles.
     
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  17. Eeyore.

    Eeyore. Member

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    yeah smooth nuts.. i mean its not great... but to tell you the truth it is better than half the shit people here post. keep it up.
     
  18. respERATION

    respERATION Banned

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  19. klic

    klic Elite Member

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    it clearly says skwint, but yah, stick to paper for now skwint

    and smooth, im not really feeling the top part of your I then haha, it would just look better with a single line I without the stuff on the top and bottom

    sewby - i actually kind of like it, its different

    give crits to get them guys
     
  20. branez

    branez New Member

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    that makes me sad. i had my heart set on 'hero.' woe is me.