right one ma man
and youll get better

 

@TEOS-The second one down on the second page looks sick. Its simple, but still has a nice flare to it. (Just my 2 cents)

 

everyone above on this page just go simple and then develop by writing it on a piece of paper till you dont see white on the paper anymore. tweak a little until it looks good. just keep practicing. dont go too complicated yet until your good. keyboard letterssss

 

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lol why would you want to write backwards? that's a window, you could've just written normally on the other side
as for crits on your last flick. that tag's pretty fine, only thing I would fix is to tighten up that R, it's left leg needs to be shorter to align with the word's baseline, and the right leg needs to extend differently, I'm not liking that swirl... but that's just a personal preference more of a crit.

I found a bunch of foam boards next to the dumpsters this morning so I took the biggest one and tried the XL markwell (silver) and the L markwell (blue) markers I bought from here
they're pretty nice, the XL is really good, but only on clean smooth surfaces so far it proves
anyhow, opinions on the tag are welcome

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yeah i get ya on the last one was fair rushed as it was done during the day, on the other backwards bit usually when i do the inside window part it gets buffed within a couple days when its on the outside it stays up longer dunno why myself just how its been gooing lately

btw toop isnt just being put up for no reason i thought someone would think its me but its actually just a mate who died back in 07 so keeping it up for memory sake

 

the H looks kinds wierd, like a upside down a maybe?

 

haha ima rock that as an A one day coz i see what he means

aye btw phat2 i needa get a flick but yeah if it hasnt been buffed the tag of ur name should still be up i hope if not its getting redone and then ill post a flik

 

im not really liking that PHAT
i like the scriped one way better

 

hehe well no, but the nib accidentally touched the board when I was moving my hand up to strike the right bar down

 

Just a little sumthin deciding wether to loose the arrow any crits?

 

That U looks too much like a J. And make the lines thicker.

 

hows this?

 

Second one is pretty fat. Keep the U connected.

 

uuuhh stop making your P over your U, it looks like garbage, and I have never seen anypne write an R like that

 

is that like a sarcastic "well no" as in yes or just well no?

 

i think he means is sarcastically, oi anyone keen for same deal as phat2 since ima go out in like 30-60 mins might prop some random names for some fun

 

alright hows this....i feel like i need to do something to the U and bring the arrow angled tighter to the letters .....crits?