You haven't heard, have you? Tofe will NEVER progress. He'll still do his little wet noodle middle E bars, he'll still draw his wack characters, etc. *****', crits have been all you've received since you came on here.
TOFE- I like your throws but you need to leave the intermediate thread you really arent close to good enough. go to toy black books and you will probably get more crits. I would love to be able to post flicks in this thread but i dont because im not good enough
Make every single bar the same width, The E is to wide the the O is to small. Ditch coloring for now now and stop doing characters focus on letters only. Make sure the letters are spaced evenly apart. After you can do that successfully then tilt all the letters to the left then to the right then go crazy with learning little effects like shine, three-D Shadow going in all direction that will make you progress, then after that the whole graffiti thing is up to you.
Whats with all the hot heads on here? It seems now days the majority of Children just cause shit rather then give people actual constructive help. To clarify what you dident understand about my last statement is this. Graffiti in the uber toy phase is all about learning the bare minimums of bars and style, after you learn bars the rest of your life in the graffiti world cannot be taught over the internet, It all depends on your own personal drive and practice.
Sech: lose the way that little parts of the letters like fold out of the outline like random extra pieces Cant see anyone else on this page except Tofe, and hes gotten plenty of feedback Felt like coloring in my boys book....crits? View attachment 580404
E reminds me of R is kind of front-heavy, work on that, D is solid, S is kind of awkward, and looks a little like an ugly Z. Excellent coloring skills, especially on the R and the diamond.
Thanks for the crits....and the "s that looks like a z" is actually supposed to be a Z ha. And for the record to the comment about the background, It's actually a white page in a blackbook that I colored to look like 3 hole punched yellow lined paper gettin burned through. The burn/fade looks better before being scanned.
reds: best thing in my blackbook right now, thanks man. i will put as much work into your book, once we find where we put it...
Or ideally do both, and only post the latter on the public internet if you aren't from a city of a couple hundred thousand or larger