Thanks dude... it took about 40 mins to 1hr to do the page... I would suggest that you slant the left bar of the K like the G(inward) and see if that gives you more flow
even tho you do the same shit everytime, there isnt anything wrong with that i know a couple writers who use the same bomb and as long as you throw it up nice n clean its all gravy
pen freebie oldddddddd ass collab with moon that I just filled.. Mone, keep up what your doing. Wgone, the cuts in your letters are really annoying/distracting, in my opinion. And the letters are slacking... Your fills are dope, I guess that's why everyones all over your dick...
i like the full page kringe especially the sun charac. , and the pen freestyle always looks hot , but the same piece over and over is kind of annoying to me , not to mention the extensions on that top piece.
if you're going to have your style be where the letters are falling apart like the top bar on the E going horizontally, i would have make the vine type thing lower with the bit that is lowered on that bar bc it is falling, it would make it look more legit IMO. also the way you are connecting your bars making very straight ends works on the bottom of the first and second E but IMO it doesn't work with the bottom and top of the Z, maybe if it was longer? IMO the Z needs work. also, the middle bar of your E, how it is angled works but the part that is sticking out the top isn't exactly working on the same angle. like, it looks like it is going down instead of at a 50 degree angle. KNA MEAN!? it's the same problem with the other E bc that middle bar is going at about a 80 degree angle but the top part of that middle bar is too far too the right and doesn't look like it is going the same amount. but, those are all just little things that i noticed. thought i would give someone intense crits. some good crits would be the fact that i like your style overall, and want to see more of what you can do homie. love the shadow and how suttle it is.
thnx for the crits man and i like the tip on the vine dropping with the cuts gotta keep that in mind on any type of fill shit , and yeah i see what your sayin how the left bars on the e's needed to be lined up better with bit poppin out the top, the z is kind of ended bluntly also i see what u mean , but overall i like the way it came out i usually spend a lot more time on shit i sketched and colored this piece in probably an hour or a little more so i'm over it.
thanks dude. moon drew the sun charach, but i filled and shit. and that's really only my second piece in that style. the E, O, and S are the same, but the N is different than the other one..I was really just redoing it to make it work with a better N, yaknow? And I might try taking out the top extensions. I'll fuck with it.
progression is it man.just keep puttin in the work . At least you got a style there , i just got diff. shit every time , that annoys me more than anything .
this was supposed to be an exchange for bait but i fucked the I up so now i gotta gather some inspiration or someshit to sketch again only downside of freestyling everything is there is no earasing, but fuck sketchin son!
puttin in so much work to have each line sharp n stuff but the sketch ends up fucked anyway...waste of time...id go for fast lines, your shit is clean but its missing dynamik n flow...i bet your the first one out there cutting your piece to death...it really can happen...
deff. not dope, the more i look at it the less i like it lol, letters are just outta proportion oh well but i like my shit clean i dont like sloppy shit, and i dont usually dont draw many letters besides the ones i need to, so its all just fun n games with that ish
gotta say that B looks like an R i mean before i read what u typed...i said to me hmm nice R anyways its real clean but try working on the letter structure alot more then the cleanliness since you got that down
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ohhhh <3 dope but next time bring the "T" lower n make thick extension to the right of it otherwise sexy as fuck yo wat u write lololol ?im too lazy to check the pms cause my computer slow as hell