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The Writing Thread.

Discussion in 'General Discussion' started by joust, Feb 6, 2005.

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  1. Cherubic Meekus

    Cherubic Meekus Elite Member

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    ''This deplorable act of jaded consumption,'' sighed the sugar-headed Eastern Prince.He was lugubrious at the fact that his jurisdiction was considered lamentable why the Southern Ghouls of absinthian apotheosis were lionized.
    The Ghouls were morose,perversive and ill-humored.They pursued the boy who's endeavor was to end the lifes of his fellow peers,first shooting the sorid couple who lay bare in the middle of the field,swapping saliva in a profligate manner. ''There in your way.Let there congenial senses come to the surface ,as they drift through the sea of thought , distraught at the logic of this consequence,'' they whispered with a twinge of snarly animosity. The climax of this night saw a bloodied pile of pubescent children lay with irenic and subjued composure.Only the lips of the guilty twitching.
    The Eastern Prince sat, pondering these antecedent events of which occurred due to the manipulative wording of the Ghouls. Now they hold a prominent status in the minds of the Irks. The Irks were quaint beings of very small stature that burrowed under the Washing Basket of the Western World, their only shelter being this dirty-laundry utility and the Rubber Fish of '67. The Rubber Fish fell from the sky under unascertained circumstance. They pieced the X-ray atmosphere, and found there way into the smog of the Irk's habitat. Now they lay still on top of the basket, providing some minor security. Though the Irk's minds were being tainted by the Ghouls who offered them preponderant refuge and Shirley McClain’s (the esteemed cocktail of choice).

    ^^^
    An unfinished story entitled ''A Bag Full of Rubber-Fish Enchant,''
     
  2. Cherubic Meekus

    Cherubic Meekus Elite Member

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    They traveled over lucid hills which revealed the Marlborough men who, with an askance posture that emphasized the cancer, apathetically strode. The Irks had been lead to the irriguous valley (or as it once stood), where the ghouls liked to haunt the area as nature expressed its own promiscuity. Always breeding, all producing, always engaging in covetous acts. The Eastern Prince tried to authorize the Irk's on the dangers that loom, but the agitable creatures infringed his warning. They were sliced and minced under the purple sky, than thrown into the tent where the bodies of the children who had been oppressed and the giants (Talleman) that had been pursued were kept. A jamboree took place outside, coinciding with the decay of extinct Irks.
    The antiquated Prince was forlorn as his world was hushed.
     
  3. Cherubic Meekus

    Cherubic Meekus Elite Member

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    Amen

    My stories are about the decay of civilisation and drug abuse...
    Yes, a slightly bleak subject to recieve coverage
    But I dont talk about fucking faeries or the rise of the dead...
    My stories have political undertones.
     
  4. element503

    element503 Elite Member

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    Masked with nylon with a can of krylon while on
    point see you through the walls we write on
    ride strong with a crew who’s considered sly cons
    high on this rush provided my wrong
    cops try to put a stop to my art and hip hop
    but they knock what we rock we got the streets locked
    juras don’t mix with pinturas
    catch us slipin and try shoots us
    we’re looters of virgin walls the no gutters
    writers reign supreme on the street art scene
    my team goes by the OPM kings
    rings and tight cliques we mix to snipe hits
    and be the uppest that’s the main thing
    catch graffitIwreck on my city set
    my committee gets respect well known with a gritty rep
    who step to the bomb yard with a fat tip
    tryin to get a name in this world and that’s it

    just a little peice from OPM's old album. you should go pick it up. the old one or the new one. its real good. its hip-hop / rock / mellow stuff.
     
  5. scarface

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    Long Live the King

    ~for B.I.G.

    The crown wasn’t always worn by Jay Z

    Before him the king of NYC was B.I.G.

    Beyond the east

    And his legacy is deeper than dyin’ for beef

    You best believe all emcees since the early 90’s

    Owe respect to the one who lived notoriously

    It’s a tragedy that kids these days don’t know his true abilities

    All they hear is “One More Chance” and “Biggie can’t you see”

    They don’t know “Party and Bulls**t” or the remix to “Dolly My Baby’

    S**t, shorty on the Da Band didn’t even know the words to “Juicy”

    There’s a reason Jay says a B.I. line in damned near every rhyme

    And why even with a Mohawk Puff can hold his head high

    Cause real n***as do real things

    And Christopher Wallace was a true kingpin

    Heads fiend for a single can’t even dream about a classic

    But he dropped two back to back before he laid in his casket

    And that’s a feat that can’t be ignored

    Regardless of any mics, Grammy’s or charts on Billboard

    So as the torch gets passed to a new generation

    Of rap phenoms and overnight sensations

    We gotta lick a shot for the famous Frank White

    The playa president who flipped the game to end his hustler’s plight

    The Black male misunderstood

    Who made it to the Hamptons out of his Brooklyn hood

    Cause s**t ain’t all good as I look at the madness currently goin’ on

    Cats quote his rhymes but act like they don’t remember why he’s gone

    These n***as work so hard to get from the streets to the stage

    But still wanna act like they slangin’ work to get paid

    Big was slain on this day eight years past

    And heads is still tryin’ to live the streets on and off wax

    Fact is we already know how it goes

    And I don’t wanna have more stories to tell about fallen Hip-Hop heroes

    One of my life’s biggest regrets is never hearin’ him spit it in the flesh

    One of the best I wear his face with pride on my chest

    B.I. we weren’t ready for you die

    But through them hits, your spirit’s kept alive long after your death

    North, South, East, West, put up your deuces and pour out some liquor for the nicest MC

    Ya’ll know the steelo rest in peace to Mr. “Unbelievable”


    Flow will close a biggie poem thread but not some shitty ass fuck g-unit thread
     
  6. siroez

    siroez Senior Member

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    the tolerance of truth

    the glimmer, a slight twinkle
    here and of course so unreachable
    compared to a star in the night sky
    so close but still so very far
    desire; burning, throbbing, pushing
    lessons learned and always preached
    moving me on, to pick a star
    from the sky and put it my pocket
    ill grow, and flourish, and shine
    somehow ill always be a little empty
    because not everything can be mine
    as my path unfurls infront of me
    unrolls in its tedious glory
    i see it leads to a beautifull place
    bright with a maginificant shine
    though i cant see it i still proceed forward
    footprints allow me to trace my path through time
    as i keep my steady forward pace
    i have to much desire to lose this race
    stubborn, yes i know i am
    this seagoat moves for no unworthy man
    though i will assist all i can
    i still wish to be prosperous on this land
    sacrifices to make and stones to step over
    a lesson once learned, proved to be fact
    now a regulation, a standard
    trace the footprints further back
    like the cord to the wall
    it proves you cant be two places at once
    those would be: here and so very far
    you can only travel forwards
    in a unchangable unstoppable direction
    that brings you to the end of the road
    which beholds the glorified beauty of truth

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    the poem is about knowledge, and walking down the road called life.
     
  7. Cut By Cut
    One cut
    Two cut
    Three cut
    Four.
    I watch your blood
    Hit the floor.
    Five cut
    Six cut
    Seven cut
    Eight.
    This is the product
    Of all my hate.
    I slit your throat
    Watch blood flow
    Don't do it yourself
    It'll soften the blow.
    You cry for me
    My hatred tears
    Built from your lies
    From over the years.
    I slash your throat
    I slit your wrists
    I enjoy the moment
    No, I'm not pissed.
    I turn my head
    To hide my smile
    You're finally gone
    And I'm not in denial.
    I'll accept all blame
    Coz I don't care
    I'm just so happy
    To know you?re not there.
    One cut
    Two cut
    Three cut
    Four.
    I watched your blood
    Hit the floor.
    Five cut
    Six cut
    Seven cut
    Eight.
    You were the product
    Of all my hate.
    Satan sent me a message
    And said that all was well
    And he thanked me too for sending
    You straight to Hell.


    © LUST , 2005-08-4
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    For those i Loath this ones for You
     
  8. K0tt0nKandyandP0psicles

    K0tt0nKandyandP0psicles Elite Member

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    nice haha
    did you used to be on B.S. lust?
    your sn/avatar/sig gif seem familiar, i could just be confused though
     
  9. Tony

    Tony Elite Member

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    i dont make the rule i just enforce them.

    you failed to fallow the rules and use the search feature before making a new thread. in this case there just happend to be one for this specific purpose.

    but if you wanna call me a "hater" or have a problem with me you can use the PM feature...
     
  10. naw never been to BS juss browsed it then one day.."couple days ago" i decided to join in the fun
     
  11. i dont make the rule i just enforce them.

    you failed to fallow the rules and use the search feature before making a new thread. in this case there just happend to be one for this specific purpose.

    but if you wanna call me a "hater" or have a problem with me you can use the PM feature... [/b][/quote]
    well ill speak my mind..and u failed to not be a dickhead end of conversation
     
  12. Losing My Mind
    I’ve become weak
    Lost and alone.
    With tears of sulphur
    And a heart of stone.


    I’ve become nothing
    A speckle in this time
    Thoughts became illegal,
    Feelings became a crime.


    I’ve become a follower
    My hands are tied by love.
    I’ll sit and watch the crowded graves
    And the killing of the dove.


    I just fail to feel alive.
    We fight and we brawl
    And then, as we die
    We stare at the whitewash wall
    And cry.


    Sitting in the corner,
    Watching you point and stare
    “See that poor Boy
    He’s dying over there�

    ________________________
    Short Poem..
    © LUST, 2005-06-12
     
  13. Mse

    Mse Elite Member

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    i like this last one lust
    specially the second verse/passage
     
  14. Proper

    Proper Elite Member

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    Is this what you were looking for Bilal?
     
  15. bilal_tariq

    bilal_tariq Elite Member

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    Yes sir, thank you.

    Let me revive this thread.

    [FONT=Verdana, Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif]He told my conscience that "life is short" like as if I didn't already know that. [/FONT]
    [FONT=Verdana, Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif]But I still listened to what he had to say. [/FONT]

    [FONT=Verdana, Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif]Still? [/FONT]
    [FONT=Verdana, Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif]So what?[/FONT]
    [FONT=Verdana, Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif]Who knows.[/FONT]

    [FONT=Verdana, Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif]He told me keep those memories tight. Hold them tightly. Never let go of them. [/FONT]
    [FONT=Verdana, Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif]I nodded. As he stroked his beard and switched his left leg on top now, I realized he still had more to say. [/FONT]

    [FONT=Verdana, Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif]He still spoke.[/FONT]
    [FONT=Verdana, Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif]I still listened. [/FONT]

    [FONT=Verdana, Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif]So then he continued saying that lose them once, you will get them back, -you will- [/FONT]
    [FONT=Verdana, Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif]lose them twice, you will get them back, -some people are very lucky- [/FONT]
    [FONT=Verdana, Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif]lose them thrice, you will get them back, -God must be watching over you-[/FONT]
    [FONT=Verdana, Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif]Lose them once more = You don't care anymore. [/FONT]

    [FONT=Verdana, Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif]And that made the hair on the back of my neck stand up. He touched my forehead.[/FONT]
    [FONT=Verdana, Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif]His index finger was like a drumstick- firm and slender. He took a breath. [/FONT]

    [FONT=Verdana, Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif]He still spoke. [/FONT]
    [FONT=Verdana, Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif]*I felt his cold touch on my forehead* [/FONT]
    [FONT=Verdana, Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif]I still listened. [/FONT]

    [FONT=Verdana, Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif]He went on saying that before anything of that sort happens,[/FONT]
    [FONT=Verdana, Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif]it's best you cherish those memories save the last minute. [/FONT]
    [FONT=Verdana, Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif]And so I did. [/FONT]
    [FONT=Verdana, Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif]*Although I still wondered why he touched my forehead* [/FONT]
    [FONT=Verdana, Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif]He removed his finger now, had one last thing to say so... [/FONT]

    [FONT=Verdana, Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif]He still spoke. [/FONT]
    [FONT=Verdana, Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif]*My forehead must have had some side-effect now (unnecessary pondering)* [/FONT]
    [FONT=Verdana, Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif]I still listened. [/FONT]

    [FONT=Verdana, Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif]He finally said that you have a lot of space in ur mind. [/FONT]
    [FONT=Verdana, Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif]That's when I realized that I have a habit of remembering things. [/FONT]
    [FONT=Verdana, Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif]Anything. Everything. He was tall. [/FONT]

    [FONT=Verdana, Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif]He didn't speak now. [/FONT]
    [FONT=Verdana, Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif]I still listened. [/FONT]
    [FONT=Verdana, Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif]He still didn't speak. [/FONT]
    [FONT=Verdana, Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif]I looked up. [/FONT]
    [FONT=Verdana, Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif]He was gone. [/FONT]
    [FONT=Verdana, Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif]I woke up. [/FONT]
    [FONT=Verdana, Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif]He had dissappeared. [/FONT]

    [FONT=Verdana, Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif]That night/day *for me they mean the same* I realized that when these GB memory cards are p00fd, and when the GB hard-disks are g00fd, my system is going to crash *0utch.* [/FONT]

    [FONT=Verdana, Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif]I can always be your virtual hard-disk. Since then I maintained. ____________________________________________________________________________________ [/FONT]
    [FONT=Verdana, Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif]Folder Fuh Life- [/FONT]
    [FONT=Verdana, Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif]-Be.[/FONT]