the only throwie on this page that doesnt need work is that DOPE throwie... all yo other dudes...wrk on it... shpel...stay on paper...get you style profected and your hand style needz a lot of work
ok i worked on it alittle more.Obviously it still needs alot of work.Dont mind that gay eye i drew in the A lol...Crits please.im not sure if i should keep working on this thowie on start with something completly differnt cause it seems my name is hard to right n i dont plan on changing it..help please! [Broken External Image]:https://www.t-mobilepictures.com/myalbum/photos/photo11/dd/0b/f12f0c4449f5.jpeg Shapel-Def stick to paper for a little longer before u try on a wall Dope-thats is dope!Lets see it on a wall cesspool-Good shit...U in NY?
Sneak- Don't make the lines inside your letters so curvy, and don't connect them all together. And just personal preference, but I'm not feeling the mouth in the A. If you got rid of it, and lowered the eye to the middle of the letter it'd be dope, though.
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well, man, a big tip is to start in the middle of the page. It will get you moving a lot faster than chilling at the bottom of the page.
my first ever painted throwie (did it last month)... ignore my shit handstyle, i have no can control [Broken External Image]:http://i430.photobucket.com/albums/qq26/klic1/IMG_0706.jpg [Broken External Image]:http://i430.photobucket.com/albums/qq26/klic1/IMG_0707.jpg and my second one, same day, sorry bout the shitty flick, my color choice was pretty bad too [Broken External Image]:http://i430.photobucket.com/albums/qq26/klic1/IMG_0708.jpg shake - your k needs some work, bring the bottom line to the left more... and make the bottom of your s kind of extend a tiny bit longer if you know what i mean
wow,so basic im guessing you've been writing for like a month and the only writers you know are the ones featured in that mark echo game....cause thats the most generic and used e a person could draw. boes(?)-other then the huge retarded lower case b your letters arent that bad. shpel-i like the little face you should keep going with that. bigblue-your sig is the shit....gave me a woody.
thatguy - straighten up ur letters bro crits on this? any help on wut i should do wit da k? [Broken External Image]:http://i93.photobucket.com/albums/l72/hockeyplayer_01/1223082204.jpg
make the k more a k.. left ends shot stick out more, kinda looks like a h with a twist =D thnx for the crits i might change it to bose..cause it can sound like boys
if so, why would she say yes, and subject herself to the 2498349873498573194 creepers and lurkers on BS. Not saying you are, I respect you Yarbles, but there are others on this board I wouldn't trust around my gramma....
hah word you're probably right Edit: alright lets keep it that way... hahaha I don't even kno what the fuck I'm saying Sorry I;m high