yeah im still trying to figure out what wrong with it...

 

maybe the bottom right half is too rounded and elongated try changing that

 

The right part overlaps the left part. It should be the other way around. Do you know what I mean?

 

icon fix up the n, and try drawing the bottem part of the n first so it doesnt overlap and see how it looks

capo nice fill, but you need to work on your can control and letter structure

 

proof-stop the swirls its wack
icon- idk its like i seen it somewere dont know tho
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I colored the swirly thing and made two more, is it still bad??

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^ essentially what I was trying to say

 

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tried that, still looks wrong dont ya think?



and dirty dozen, go simpler, i can't make out what the letters are.

 

it looks better just play around with it till it looks right

 

New name

crits n comments?

 

^ lines are a bit shaky, try doing a better copy or something.



does that look alright?

 

Icon - dope e/o holes, but your N... Try using a lower case N,
instead of N use a n

 

thanks


tried some lower case n's

 

Look's good.

Really want 2 see it with paint though.

 

so you think im ready to start gettin up?

might go out soon...

 

the throwie is pulling together, much better then the first throwie i did and yes you may as well just go practice it somewhere and go big i renember when i first started i made a mistake of making it really small and it just makes it look terriable

 

so would this look wack on a wall??

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yes it wouls get rid of all the swirls they are really wack