kJay- as said before just clean that shit up its pretty sloppy, and id say have more of a round O than a square O like the one you have there. dena- looks dope dude, i like the S a lot but i think the D could be cleaned up a bit
oh true haha it looks like an S man, maybe make the middle part of the E a little smaller, kinda hard to see
[Broken External Image]:http://i207.photobucket.com/albums/bb33/skateboard23/0318091713.jpg crits? my A is fucked Big Blue- So sick Kjay- I like the I and E but work on the Z and O
BigBlue-I enjoy the sharp handstyle. Zarb- Work on the shadow its abit off I got bored (pun intended)
DS-BALLIN DUDE..sick Lasto-not bad, lose the drips for now...work on the a, s, and t....and make them all one size bigblue-dope man Crits?
[Broken External Image]:http://i207.photobucket.com/albums/bb33/skateboard23/0318092113.jpg Doin some cleaning up War- Pretty ill but your R is alittle to small for the rest of your letters i think Skwint- Sick always liked your throwie
Apocalypse- I don't like the under lining of the words with the last letter. Also the arrow off the word on the R (KAR?) is super lob-sided. Like Zarb said, fix up the letter size and you'll be on you're way. Zarb- If thats an O at the end of the throw and not a period then make it the same size. Other then that make everything the same size and itill be looking great! As for me I was thinking about writing another word, (not ditching my last one) Just starting to write both. Here's what I'm starting out with, I dont know witch one I like more MILF or MILPH Crits would be greatly appreceated. Oh and I bit the fuck out of EMEK'S M.
weakfingers- thats awesome, i should do that with my skateboard lol war- im not really feeling the A or the R zarb- i like it but the L looks a little funny in my opinion milf- i really like the first one, simple, i like it lol just messing around with different letter styles, crit please =]
walking carpet you need to do what Reach is doing over in the blackbook thread and what i am about to do straight up BARSSSSSS plain and simple now i am going to go do my own bars haha
bigdream- make your v the same size as the rest of the throw rough first skech of new name any crits? keep in mind i t just threw this down in like 15 min its more to see what you guys thought of the new name
[Broken External Image]:http://i207.photobucket.com/albums/bb33/skateboard23/0319091642.jpg Shayk- I dont really know what the 2nd and 4th letters are, E? or I? and i think i liked your old name better
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KJay- sloppy yo, clean it up and it would be nice. Shayk- i agree with provinT13, not sure about the 2nd and 4th letter. weakfingers- im liking milph better, but both of them are tight. [Broken External Image]:http://i704.photobucket.com/albums/ww49/snackmachinery/001.jpg ^shit from geometry, crits please?
its not really geometrical.... hahahahahahahahahaha..haha...ha... not funny eh Just work more on your bars, make them evenly fat, and your E is too small