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what do u guys think?

 

im making a thread on this..

 

Zarb - fix the O

 

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feedback?

 

dont smoke crack.. and what i mean by this is try n keep your hand steady..

 

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^^ fucking rad man..

 

dude, that shit would be fucking fire without all the loops in the N



Just fucking around.

 

^^that shit is funny man made me lul (a good funny)

 

lol are you mocking my faces nikkkaa??? i donno i like the loops for some reason, theve like grown on me

 

Nah man, I'm not saying totally loose the loops,
just that having them on top and bottom kind of squishes it.

 

alright. thanks man ill work on it.

 

Oh-not bad...
BS-pretty tight
Nage-shakey shit work on it



Crits?

 

not feelin it war. just looks sloppy as fuck. idk wat crits to give really just not feelin it.

id say definitely get rid of the face tho.

 

faces in throws are like unnessesary extentions and arrows coming out of no where in pieces, toys love to used them but they just dont understand them

 

Ight, yeah I was just trying it out, and I'll work on it....sharpies don't really look good and bleed bad not in my favor...

You talkin about the hand with the arrows? I'm workin so friggen hard on that thing to be a one liner with actual steeze, but yeah it wasn't my best I admit.

 

nah man im not talking about your hand man if youve ever seen mine you would know i have no room to talk about that i was talking about those sketches u usually see ppl post fallowed by the usual HOLY SHIT GO TO THE NEW TO GRAFF THREAD comments

i was talking about the face you have in the throw, not to try to be an asshole here but your letters are garbage, and when your letters are garbage putting faces inside the makes them look even worse. learn your letters first and then put faces in them

 

I don't get what the fuck is going on with your shit war, it just looks like a bunch of blobs.
Believe it or not, throwies DO have structure to them.

 

Oh, well I'm the only dude who graffs around here so I kinda gotta learn on my own...this throw was experimenting, my older one though people said it was pretty good so I figured I could try a little more.

Yeah it's fine, as I said I gotta learn on my own so I'm just trying shit out, the face I see isn't workin, and I've been workin on the letters for a while, and some people said they were okay and basic, so I've just been trying to progress.

I'll get to drawing