Noir- I like where your going with the really really basic shit, I started that way to, Just draw that out alot and alot and you'll start doing small things with some letters, I like the direction your going in.... Nice and simple. That way when you go and paint it youll have a better chance doing it clean sooner then later. Nic- Thats not really a throwie... Lusid or Lusib? - Fix the last letter up.
[Broken External Image]:http://i207.photobucket.com/albums/bb33/skateboard23/las-1.jpg noir- Ya stay with thw basic letters but keep practicing making them all the same size cause your N is alot bigger then everything else. Big Dream Scheme- Its not too bad but I have no idea what the last letter is. Try making the bottem of your S the same size as the top Kem- I like that but make your E and M alittle skinnier to be the same size as your K Swob- Lay off all the extra stuff until you have some solid letters down EEL- Wait is all of that a joke? Im not trying to be a dick but cmon
View attachment 481842 Lucid(?)-pretty ill, but the last letter could be better... (i think it's a d?)
I am sorry if I sound like a dick, but for that first thing, there is no letter in the alphabet shaped like that?
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cn i please get sum crit 4 this one? did it with paint markers on a skateboard 4 my bro i dont write dope kidd thats just their nickname <a href="http://s145.photobucket.com/albums/r214/OpotikiShawty21/?action=view¤t=NEWRWR083.jpg" target="_blank"><img src="http://i145.photobucket.com/albums/r214/OpotikiShawty21/NEWRWR083.jpg" border="0" alt="pic"></a>
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I fucking like this. I like simple, i throw simple. Opinions def welcome, just don't be a cock and tell me "it looks like shit" because i'm not writing the way you do. [Broken External Image]:http://i722.photobucket.com/albums/ww223/wreckteck/BB shit for forums/blackbookiethrow.jpg
Definitely work on your letters. They look like fat people rolls right now, eventually, you'll work up to marshmallows, then you'll be at throwup style. Good first try though.
hahaha fat people rolls. work eg; shape + structure or just thin them down? thanks for the input btw.