Fetus man, In my opinion. The F looks like a U, The T is way to pointy and the U should be Level.
This is just my opinion but its looking alot better then last time!

 

squint not really feelin those R's

 

Fetusr-im feeling it yo
weak-the T doesnt really flow,and i cant really tell what the last letter is but overall keep working on it because it starting to come together.

just trying testing this out,not really good at throwies
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just started writing, can anyone give me crits??

 

Squint- Your R as an R = not feelin it
Your R as an A= Fucking nice.
Just sayin'

 

hey guys havent been drawning to long
i'd love some help with ideas and what not

 

good one liner work on ure a doh

 

this robot can move

heres another
crits holla>>

 

Word, Yeah my R is goofy as fuck. I kinda just winged it when i did the exchange, but yeah thanks for pointing that out for me, I really needed an A.

 

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I know I said I was gonna stay away but fuck it I cant haha. Been workin on this 2 letter
Squint- I like it man you finally had your N and T go with well eachother
Ware- I cant see the A in it really, maybe stay away from one lines for alittle bit
Sez- Pretty nice start, that Z is straight keep working with it. Make the S the same way as your Z maybe

 

Good to see you steppin into your own style
Looks good.

 

Weak E, nice A, weak hand.

Keepin' it simple.

 

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Fear - Try to make your A uppercase like the rest of the letters.

I felt my throw last page for yarbles my R was to fucked so i tried to redo it...
Sticky kfc fingers = shitty lines

 

fear change your whole throw. the a is decent but the f is whack the e is whack and the the r is whack.

 

serious eh, k ill try some new shit this week

 

Skwint, thought I would return the favour, I Lol'd really hard when I saw those grease stains btw xD

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o boy! haven't been on in a while...caz i've been away and haven't drawn for a while. anyways, got a new name (con.2)...here's some stuff. I stil suck haha

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fear: i like it...maybe fatten up the f a bit

 

Oh so you think im asian with the face in the Q?
I'll stomp you with my size 16 air jordans, Or ill slap you to death with my 14 inch penis.
I'm not asian but nice try though.