Bezar - Your B is weird; take off the extensions on the left. Your E is too long on the bottom. Make both ends of the Z match. Take that extension off the R, and make the leg the same length as the other one. Basically, practice and work on your bars. Came - I like the fourth the best, work with it.
^^^The only thing i like is your name. Made my night. There's already a Safe.... He kills it -----> http://www.iloveletters.ca/WALLS/PhotoPages/SAFEwall2.htm Im on the verge of changing names. I like SQUINT but its super long and i can change the letters around but on the other hand COEN is super easy to draw but theres not a lot I can do with the letters. Advice anyone? Oh the that squint throweeeeee is really out of proportion.
I like the coen shit better, weak. I'd make the N fatter. If you are gonna do glasses, I'd go all out with a face.
if you sent me an entry for the 'little vagina' handstyle battle or 'cyan' throwie battle, send it to me again because i did a system recovery on my computer and deleted everything. The deadline for both of these battles has been extended until sunday if your still looking to get in
You write on cardboard? Make all your letters the same size To safe. Coen - I'm not digging the name that much, but your throwie is alright.
the whole point of a throw is to get up quick and big. it's alllll about flow. you lack flow in your letters when put together. you should be able to bust out a hollow like nothin. if you're thinkin "so what do i change to make it better?", stop right there. fuck with your lines, look how the letters flow together (if at all. if not, pick better letters). don't ask for anyone to exchange with you, i feel it's best to practice "trial and error" cuz it forces you to get familiar with your letters and it'll help progress your own style. what you write is your name, and your name should flow naturally...
[Broken External Image]:http://www.bikealbany.com/i/images/dscn0641.jpg bezar: start with simpler keyboard letters..like actually just copy them, and then tweak out some stuff
Throws ar usually bubbly kinda. Like its hard to do a tech throw when your just starting out. My advice is to keep your shit like the most basic of letters and go from there. Ill post an example in abit.
View attachment 503200 Con- Work on your shading. Like try to get it all lined up and stuff. And make sure your outline color is the same color as your shadow. For throws at least. Bezar- Try to stay away from lower case R's. Just personal experience. Other than that it's just the evolution of your letters. Crits please? Plen blows had to outline a few times....
What? That ghoul is amazing, Well thats just my opinion. The lines in the H that connect the two seems kinda messy but thats probably a stupid mistake. First throw, with a new name, I know it looks like shit. And I know the fetusR skinhead kid is gonna see this on here, Your throw was dissed..... fucked up on the hole in the O up and N.
i think you should make your C like your E. and i wasnt talkin to ghoul. his is gravy. i edited the post