where ur squigaly thing is at. Put a hole in it.

 

alright. well just so i don't waste anymore markers..this is what it will basically look like with the circle.

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o and btw guys, thanks a ton for helping me out

 

Make something like a vertica oval.

 

i think your O would look better as just an oval, without that lame bubbly shit on the side.

 

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meat - those throws ar pretty damn clean. i like the "T" in the last one

 

k is dope, try this E

 

It looks like you outlined then filled. The "A" needs a bigger line at the bottom. You tag is ok but maybe put the quote marks on the bottom

 

does this look any better? i messed up the shading so just completely ignore it.

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MEAT: everything looks dope. keep doing it
Kem: add a little bit more of a curve to the right side of the e.

 

much better

 

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quick two letter

 

zarb, make the right leg of your k go out further.

 

ek, right? I like it, real smooth lines. i bet a little more time spent would clean it up right to where it needs to be

 

iselldope- wat e?

 

how bout this crits on this and the tag

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crits please

 

What I think is get rid of the line in the middle of the O. See what it looks like blank.

 

nah, keep the line, it ads consistency with all the letters..Now that you have a basic sketch try contorting...for a little bit of variation.

 

Looks good but its boring, Add some style up into your letters and it'll look alot better.
Same to you Kase.. or is that Kasp? If its supposed to say Kasp make the P's bar more defined, because it looks like an E. The handstyle could use some work. looks plain.

 

yea its kasp and what could i add to the handstyle to give it some more flare. any ideas you could show me?