understood darkeist. dush- you should work on your D a lil more but the rest looks good. geek- i cant even really tell thats a k..
Sin - That E looks bad. Lose the highlights. Also, work on the R. Prane - Work on legibility. Geek - The G is too fat on the top and the K doesn't look like a K.
no offense sinnner but that same is just gay, its gay what im implies and the overall meaning is just cheesy. Just save yourself alot of trouble and look for a new name, no hate but yeah but im trying to help you in the long run
ahh yeah i get ya man, coming up with a new name sucks. cause i been thinkin of hella shit but i can never settle.. know what i mean??
Yeah, we all go through that haha. New E and R, correct. Also, in the last picture, you kinda threw off the size of each letter: make them relatively the same size.
[Broken External Image]:http://i985.photobucket.com/albums/ae339/PushYourEdge/MY blackbook sketching/DSCN0456.jpg Critz please. I recently changed my name after spending 5 months with one name, so now that I have my new name solidified I'm ancy to get start hittin up the city with throwies of my new name. I think it's good enough to start throwin em up...what do u think??
i like it. has alot of cool stuff. but i would try keeping all your letters capitals. and also think about changing the rain drop looking circles inside the letters. But i like the name Dzerv. tight.
rasta tagger- feelin the dush but the geek needa find a new k kew-looking kinda sloppy Royalblue-chill with the highlights and multiple colors for now,no need,shit looks simple tho need some flow View attachment 536619 View attachment 536620 critz?
[Broken External Image]:http://img192.imageshack.us/img192/7664/juez.jpg Hey, so I just started sketching some throws the other day. I like this one but I know for damn sure there's room for improvement. Its not colored and theres alot of extra lines in there but I think you probably get the idea. I'm looking for some crits here. Thanks edit: I know the Z is a little small, and the name means judge in spanish
whats good b-science, a little while back i did a throw here nd someone told me to change the A nd the E, so i did the old one nd then a different one under it for comparison, lemme kno what u think: click to enlarge...incase it didnt already say so
royalblue your not ready for the streets m+s the M is nice but whats the second letter? juez youve got the simple idea down but now you need to clean that up and even out your bars