Your hands GREATLY outweigh your throws man, that needs a lot of work. pretty much every letter. that little bouncy ball on the back of the A ruins it. The E doesn't need a lower lip, or a jawline, just one line. same with the P, no need to fold it in. the holes are really cheesy looking too, just a line of a dot or a hole that follows the shape of the letter would be fine.
lol^... guywhodrinkstea is that begen ? Anyway the second e on the second throw resembles an f too much fix that and your letters do the same as mine start one size and with each letter get larger so idk i'm working on that too. Are you left handed by any chance?
Sorry for my shit earlier! Just pisses me off when i feel like im not making progress. is this better..[Broken External Image]:http://img811.imageshack.us/img811/5148/picture25.jpg Uploaded with ImageShack.us
i understand whats its suppose to be but your bunny doesnt really look like a V it just looks like a character, the I looks like a C....i shouldnt have to explain that one, and the E looks like a t/+. Define your letters
thatd be an ugly ass t the v is more towards a bunny cuz it expresses itself for that given time n i like it i mean cmon it has a face as a base n 2 ears for the v...the i being a c is only cuz of the lighting....that line goes all the way thru....the the heart beat in the t is to break it out to be an e....so yea...
Some older throws I've painted. My last post is a more cartoony style I wanted to work on, but I guess I'll scrap it.
The overlaps at the bottom of the E and G don't look like they need to be there, but you still need to have that middle bar visible for the G. And your N doesn't look quite right. Not a bad start though.
[Broken External Image]:http://i390.photobucket.com/albums/oo348/Numaga/downsized_0728001427.jpg going simple lol tea - looks good, i don't like that little thing on the top of the N though
Hey guys, im fairly new to graffiti and this forum. just looking for some crits, dont hesitate to be harsh messin around with spikes, and one liners... [Broken External Image]:http://img683.imageshack.us/img683/7572/picture0002n.jpg [Broken External Image]:http://img836.imageshack.us/img836/5286/picture0001m.jpg
your R kinda looks like a P at a glance, your N is kinda big, and your K looks like an X. i like your steez though.
yea i noticed the n to im working on it I dont like my Rs im trying to find one that is going to work
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