Your M is an N, but for the A, just bring the round part all the way up to the cut Horus- Proportions Moner- I liked your other M better, the e is too tall, and the hole in is should have an opening like in the O, but it's still dope. Smile- That's pretty sick for Paint. Keep the dot above the i away from the L, and also, the L and E get really fat towards the end. New stuff I'm messin with. Crit me please. [Broken External Image]:http://img189.imageshack.us/img189/3968/dsc04467d.jpg [Broken External Image]:http://img340.imageshack.us/img340/6342/dsc04468n.jpg [Broken External Image]:http://img198.imageshack.us/img198/1146/dsc04469e.jpg [Broken External Image]:http://img833.imageshack.us/img833/5471/dsc04471s.jpg [Broken External Image]:http://img140.imageshack.us/img140/7351/dsc04472x.jpg
Smile, I don't like how the dot of the I is floating on the L. Also, try and make all your letters the same height and general proportions. Gettin there though, definitely keep at it. Sbal, the second one down has the most potential, also its the only one with a halfway decent A. Definitely go simpler and clean it up though, I think it'd look way better. Just be careful not to make your letters bigger as you go unless it's on purpose and you can flow it.
sbal - whats up been a long while nice progression... ra-that top left one is nice and clean with good flow diggin it
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Like that style, mogan. Really like the E [Broken External Image]:http://i137.photobucket.com/albums/q223/dark_cow1/Graf/1012102219.jpg Just a quick little thing
Try working your color first and then outline it with black... watch some vids on how real trhows are done
ehh sorry but i dont really like it hipe. your H is pretty original but keep working on it. the rest of your letters arent terrible but they def need more flow
thanks i'm still working on different letter variations that's why its just hollow less paint wasted lol
Looks like you filled it and all the paint got absorbed by the cement. Anyway, like dubbed said, original H but it needs work. Just keep drawing it on paper making little changes until you get it. The other letters are pretty solid, they just need to be tweaked so they look better.