go fuckng die

 

Oker YKK
I'm just saying man.

 

Crits plz?

 

Hate, good shit. I like your handstyle. I'd try and kill negative space, though, but that's what I'd do, I like longer throws

 

For real nose, why you so upset?

 

that throw is clean hate, only thing is the shadow is kinda off, like under the t and e

 

hate- nice throw mang
trying to get down my throws.. didnt feel like finishing the drop shadow... crtits'd be appreciated

 

^s-o is good, still not likin the a and r...they look the same...

 

damn... i thought i started to differienciate the A and the R... ill try and post more flicks later

 

if you make the left leg of the A overlap the right leg it will look more like an A

 

did these up quickly...

 

Nerd throwies nice, change the d.
Oker thats sick
Hate, looks pretty ill too. funky H

 

hope im not pointing out the obvious... but that oker bomb is not the oker who posted prior to that

 

o yup soar, i think that a looks better already. that r you be doin though where you start the right leg w/ them two straight lines it makes the r look weird, i think if you tried a more conventional throw r your shit would turn out clean

 

aight thanks mang...

 

everything with the exception of hate on the last page SUCKS

 

ehhh it doesnt quite feel right prea, it's almost there. maybe the p is too fat and the right leg of R could come out, maybe more rounded E, make A look less like an R, exclamation seems off center

 

crits please.