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GNAR - whats up with the line through the middle of the G? neg space in the N is too much, and idk about the hard corners on the right side of your R, they dont really go with the rest of it

 

gnar keep bookin looks off

ian looks decent just dont like it

 

wussup wit this shit


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Those faces are so hot

you are a king. Wow.

 

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thanks phat . any other crits/likes?

 

an outline

 

Its called a hollow, and is that an e or r?

 

its an r .. this is what im going for

 

lol sorry to blow the page up

jrone - put some structure in there and tweak your letters. you got the right idea your just making the wrong mistakes

hab112 - lets see more!

gnar & ian - clean styles. now get some flow in there. you already know what your doing. lol now just do it a million times. tweak them a little each time to let the letters develop

 

the U and H in the first one are dope, i just dont like how pointed the bottom left bar of the H is

 

and youth ur shit looks real clean i like the first and the third one the most

 

youth nice shit lovin the style
ill probs get some more throws down soon im just lazy as fuck

 

some tweaks ..a tilt on the J and made the R less blocky ..i think this is a dope throw up toy or not but all advice u can give ill accept

 

try making the top of your r smaller and the bottom bigger, looks akward.
if you think its dope do it just dont get heated when u get beefed

 

no to the foot on ur r and remember your a toy drop the ego at the door listen and learn ....hab nice choice of letters s and e are 2 of my personal favs too looks good tho man...youth steezy ass shit like always only thing is the first throw the y looks alot like an s . And gnar faces dont make the throw your style does focuis more on the style aspect.

 

i just started so i think people might fuck with my stuff but ima just keep bombing n bombing n try to keep getting better ..i think my stuff will look better in spray paint to cuz i writing on some carboard type paper n it peels THANKS

 

h1p3 thanks man, jrone pm me ur msn or someshit ill try and help you out man