Slerp lose the dead space and make your letters the same size.

 

any thoughts on this one?

 

make the letters the same size i cant tell if thats an r or a c and your d is covering your a too much

 

@4menace2society nice flicks

can i get some crits on ma throws

throwsss by grinder13, on Flickr

 

they're good and regular
not much to crit on raelly. nice job

 

Humr- your UM is ok, work on the H an R. That bottom purple h is a good one to develop.

 

thanks for the crits ,,ill work on that

 

crap throws a go go

 

bottom 1 is aight, you gotta eliminate the negative space on the M tho. G is tight. L M S need some fixin

 

Lose the eyes (I think that's what you're going for).
Fix the right leg of the "R".
Thicken the "L" and "P".
Close up the gap in the "E" or try to do an uppercase.
Keep working with that "S".

 

well i got lazy n didnt fill in the shade and the X's arent placed well but other than that any better?

 

A little. You still have to fatten up that "P" and fix the right leg of the "R" because it looks awkward.

 

how is this lookin
wilbur-i like the blue one the most

 

Getting better.
Still have to mess around with the right leg of the "R".
The "L" is still super thin compared to everything else. Maybe thin out the other letters instead?

 

Crits please.

 

Lookin alot better wilbur

 

Wilbur- looks pretty dope to me
Dreg - not really too sure what to make of it, might be worth putting some other throw ideas up as well.