bump that ewal, only clean shit on this page. vems work on ur tag nd the e hole looks odd. the v would look more soilid if the left arm was a solid line instead of the lil curves. seyr? keep practicing that throw, looks solid. skina that shitty generic style is played out. give crits nt pussy lips.
lol some one got mad ***** how do i post the same shit ? and i havent been on this shit in over 2 months and you didnt even write that long ago gtf and i feel you phat SEVR or SEYR that e is nice and the Y the S is bad and R too try flowing them better with the other ones work on your tagg btw
lol some one got mad ***** how do i post the same shit ? and i havent been on this shit in over 2 months and you didnt even write that long ago gtf and i feel you phat SEVR or SEYR that e is nice and the Y the S is bad and R too try flowing them better with the other ones work on your tagg btw
looks like FPD to me. The D doesn't seem to match the style of the other two letters. I suck at throws.... bad... but I suggest trying something more round... lowercase F and E maybe... might flow better for you.
Thanks pete. I'm goin for a funky type of style so I'm not worried about flow yet till I get some solid letters to fuc with. Originally letter was gonna be separate from eachother but i thought it might be a dece toss. And vems I think your V needs a little more structure, the M can lose the little notch on the far right, E could do with some negative space on the bottom half, and keep working on the S. ALso missed a little drop shadow on the s. Nice fill though, keep at it.
atom:listen to the crits that people r telling u or their gonna stop given em...put a hole in the A and move that T over so it doesn't look like an r just doodling crits
A's better but bring the T over so u can see where the horizontal bar hits the vertical bar on the left side like u can see on the right...is the top throw and the bottom one both done by u cuz the top ones defiantly better lol K's hurting a little though is the a backwards on the top throw on purpose?
Yeah, the a looks really weird if i do it normally. I did both, and k's are a whore to work with. I'm trying to work out another style for atom. The top one pry looks better cus i've been writing it longer. I'll extend the top bar of the t and see what comes. Thank you very much for the advice.
atom - I wouldn't extend the legs of the A and M like that. Try putting a hole in the O and see what it looks like. Also, the legs on the last one of the A don't look proportional, not because they're not the same length but because they're not the same width.
Sevr: I like both, but feel like the S on the first one doesn't fit. The rest of it I like a lot. On the second one I feel like the pointy bit at the top of the V should be on the other side to keep with the rest of the letters and put a space between the point on the R (which reminds me of flame boy from spitfire) giving it more balance. Looking good on both though. Maybe a face in the E on the first one.... it has a lip and mouth.... pierce his lip Zest3: That SO is zest fully clean. well done.
here i re-did the outline to make the letters stand out better, and hopefully add some more structure to the v a bit, also added some more effects to the fill.