shroomsh, that A isn't an A

edit, flicks!

last night, excellent spot on main street, slaps oncoming traffic plain in the face:

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this morning: TO THE BUFF !

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...fuck that

 

dam they fast to buff where u at! nice tho i really like, only thing is, get rid of those little points on the bottom of the letters.

 

i told him that so many times already

 

why is he on a ladder?

 

take a wild guess... or more like a wild look

 

a quick trow up ARTS yeah.

 

Kind of a old throwie I used. But I got bored of it, but I came back to it... And I like it.

Crits. (Yes I know S is not proportional, and yes now I realize I'm missing the line on my N.)

 

looks like ass

 

unless your a midget you shouldnt need a ladder... hes like 1 foot of the ground above his throwie

 

oie_2781955K2p1KFTZ
ED isnt quite right but you get the idea.

 

dude, he's 4 ladder steps high, how did that add up to just one foot to you?
and he's on a ladder because he was cleaning the high top of that shutter
those 2 shutters have been closed for years and no one's touched them yet. they're filthy, you should've seen the dust fall off them whil he was cleaning em. damn.
but turns out I gave the owner a wake up call by bombing em. that worker's cleaning the dust off so that he could later paint both shutters with white paint... I passed by again later and the things were squeeky clean haha.

 

looks like it left a hallow less he went back over again p kinda looks like t at first glance tho

 

super clean man, i like the dusty fill with the solid shade lines.

oh sweet, so they primed them up for you to paint again, how nice..

 

be sure to thank them when you do

 

Geza- that r gets too small, and dont do throws at the bottom unless you fit the bottom of the letters too.

Syn- be steadier with your hand or faster, maybe simplify your letters a bit and straighten them up.

Phat not hating but you should change your throws up a bit and progress it. I get the idea of recognition but you have to let your letters progress too, do a few different throws or something.



oie_2781955K2p1KFTZ
repost for crits

 

Fed, put the letters closer togeter, or slightly overlap them, otherwise, good letters

 

Crits, please

 

actually do a throw up man those just look like really weak straights