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Props, Crits...Anything?

P.S.-Ya, Smooth, Your face in your throwie is dope.

 

make all the letters same size. and the big ball on the i looks fucking stupid

 

Anything else? Other crits? Is it clean? Flow? Except for the O

 

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just started sketching this awhile ago, never painted before.

 

i know the k looks like shit, was reluctant to post it but i need some kind of crits to see where im at. back to sketching.

 

^^ lol i was talking about my K...

 

well my k is shitty too, so it looks like we're in the same boat

 

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Nice cerex love the e's

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What would you put for the top of the "i?" of that YIN throwie.

 

im just saying smaller. it looks gay when its that big tone it doown

 

tremclad is shit

 

is that in Tdot? i see an eyes tag there

 

It also looks like your drop shadow's moving in 2 different places (top and bottom). other then that, you have something half decent, just practice the same letters hundreds of times, and it'll improve on itself and after experience

 

Ye some bridge on birchmount road. these are also there

 

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crits please

 

is that joke?

 

yea

 

joke that has some potential not feeling the e n need 2 work on it some more like simples with bars hope helps
crits?
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