Lol I like you. That comeback was refreshing because it wasnt presented as if you were 15. your E's and R's are hurting. This last blue one being the only exception gor the R
Slotr. They are a bitch. I feel they work better in a piece. The movement and flow is way different. I'm having fun with this. kwu I wanna see one of those painted. In action. The motion and movement of the it would be interesting to watch.
Lyfer: the L still needs some work. Maybe make it a mix of the L you have now and that F. I've been playing with the throw Slotr did. What's worth keeping? things to try?
Ay peter, Have the top of your a kick up at the point, it'll even it out. Flick for talking, exchange with the streaker and some other dude.
How so nice? I think I follow. I have a few ideas to play with the A in my head. I think I might add another circle between the A and N.
how'bout something like this. I know I'm blowin this up... this is rough as hell, but that's not the point. just wanted it on paper to se if it's workin'.
the A cuase it looks wierd, the circle thing cause its useless, the N cause it doesnt look like a letter with those anorexic legs, the T becuase its more of a simple/straight letter T than a throwy T, the i because it doesnt fit the style and also is like the T, the other useless circle because its useless, and the K because it falls under same category as the T&I. You might want to try to have letters that dont look retarded before you try do to much with it, I.e. random circles, random hats, random pointy ends, etc., cause that shit is butt fucking ugly
peter youre still treating it like a piece. your letters need to all have a uniform style. they all need to come from the same font family if you will