blackmath- where the 2 legs on the k meet and you have that sideways v shape seperating thing cut that shit just connect them like this k in my simp (im no pro but have a general idea of structure)
Does that say magoo? Extend the left part of your M so it looks less like an A, your A, shorten the slit in the middle, make sure the bars on the G are the same as the width of the bars on all your other letters. And round out your Os. Just a bit.
take your time and try not make so many lines in the outline.. one solid line always looks better.. your throw looks like it has fur keep practicing )
I know I'm a toy and I'm gonna get shit for posting my first time painting but I really thought it came out better than I expected. Posting the landscape one just for kicks. Awesome spot with a ton of wall space, granted you're okay with getting very wet. Its under two bridges. Two seperate throwies. First one is above about 3 ft. of water. Had a tough time in the water for the first one. Second one is on dry land but I wanted to get the surroundings as well. Crits on the first one seeing as its the only one legible due to the camera angle of the second. Throw Creek. by jakemorgan96, on Flickr Throw Overdone by jakemorgan96, on Flickr
yes make the top more compact and dont do a pointy line at the bottom of the bar some thing like this: