@Hoar the H and R are good
@Kehm: Get rid of the swirl on the O



I hate how the fill came out. Pink + Yellow = never again...

 

this page blows fuckin toys!! smdh

 

crit

 

sorry..........

 

sorry. try again.

 

How's this?

 

Bump
@Beko: Like the O

 

Renak Your Shits Pretty Dope Dawg. I Like Your Red Throw Style! Keep Graffin

 

^^^ oh my god, my soul just died a little bit

 

CRITZ - i know the DNB Tag fucks the c up s bit - DONT CRIT THE DropinBombs tag it was just messing about

 

you know thats from 926 pages ago, right?

 

can we crit the sick ass character? for real though, the top of you R needs to be smaller. everyone tells you thhat, yet you never do it.

 

@ hipe - i've always dug your throws, but im not digging the B on buck, looks like its missing something. ever tried a kopr with a capital R? i like your lower case but it could be mistaken for a C, maybe im just crazy though
@ tranc - just try and do really simple throws before adding pointed tops and all other forms of "swag"
@ saveme - i just quickly skimmed it but is that an SA? if thats an S, that bubble on top looks wack
@ hoers - your A looks like an R, change that
@ kehm - i think youre going in the right direction, but every letter needs a little bit of work and needs to look cleaner
@ 6i9 - drop those squiggles on the S, they look awful. everything needs work, keep practicing and come back with something completely different from that
@ smez - i like the M and the E but i still think they all need work, it looks fairly uniform but it seems like theres too much going on and so it lacks flow
@ ebob - try one without negative space, or at least a very minor amount of negative space
@ evade - i kind of like the N and even thats a stretch, i would scrap it
@ beko - dont worry about a character on your O until all your letters look sick enough to warrant it. dont worry about shine or any of that crap worry about your letters looking good
@ axil - you get the same crits literally every single page and you dont change anything, so start changing everything

saw this on a walk with my girl today and i dont have shit to post right now so ill throw this up, also i think a lot of you guys that arent great at throw ups are wasting time doing fills and shine and shadow, why color a turd when it only looks like shit no matter what sparkle you put over it? in b4 people get butt hurt

also, hipe, if you read this would you hit me up with a GIFO throw? thinking about a name change

 

Since you gave an assload of crits I got you ... sloppy but you get the idea.

 

^ i dig that F, could be mistaken for an E though but its dope, it all looks good

 

Been workin on a couple styles for my throw, Crits?

 

just a quickie i threw down on a canvas