domakesaythink- that masked character is sick. the first one is good too its just not the type of thing that appeals to me b squared- that char is sweet but the shirt collar looks a little goofy for some reason and some of the suit jacket pinstriping but nothing major. blacktodafuture- i like the char at the bottom right of the page its simple but looks good anyways Turkeydinner- the face looks good but the body needs work. the face is really detailed but the body is too simple djmesican- thats legit but i think that whole style of char is gettin played out alts- that last one is sick. love it loki- the zombunnie is a cool concept but i say work on it more and clean up the lines and shit klic- i think you should lose that thing on his face.. it makes him look like an older balder version cyclops from xmen lol art threat- not feeling it either it looks like you're trying to have too much going on with the piercings and it just doesnt fit in my opinion. clean it up a bit kaiser- those are sick. coloring on them are dope good work no hate just crits. heres mine go easy on me lol been working at it
patch- that guy looks pretty cool. Except maybe instead of putting an X inside his ear make it actually look like an ear some of my characters. old pics View attachment 508916 View attachment 508917
[Broken External Image]:http://img11.imageshack.us/img11/74/photo13dz.jpg just a little doodle, what do you guys think?
murphys law, your newest character is dope as hell! nice detail + shadow kaiser like you said yourself proportions could be better but i still like it, good coloring art threat, ryser,emptycan, those are all kind of standard characters not feelin' them try to come up with something new heres mine lol ^^ crits
omg! i fukin love ur stuff dunsy. umm ryser, i like the fact that ur trying to make ur chars more individual with the x legs but id also maybe give it a neck and some proper legs. try tank tracks or tentacles or watever if u cant do legs. murphy, ur stuff is sick! i love zombies and urs is epic. ur skeleton is awesome 2. u probs already worked it out but the hand is to big for the cocktail glass and the arm is to skinny, make each bone thicker and a little further apart.
Dunsy: Thanks man, I dig the yeti looking guy and ninja, The only note i have is if he's talking his mouth should be open. -PeaR- : Thanks too, the hand thing was last minute, but if my camera was a lil better (the zoom in now broken) the picture goes a lil further on either side, he's wearing a tux jacket and it fills a lil of the size difference if i could scrape up money for a scanner it my look better, all my stuff looks better in person... But thanks for the crit...
Dunsy i like the I CAN DO SIMPLES pic its pretty dope good example of cartoon characs Empty can - not too bad for a beginner, but u wanna put something to it a certain flare that makes it your own and not generic Patch - try and fatten out the top of his head kind of looks like a pencil eraser Murphys law - the top pic aint my style but ill give u props on the tech work of it the skeleton on the other hand i quite enjoy, just try to even out the shading View attachment 509467 crits?
To Kaiser: Your first one is pretty sick. Her left breast should recede in to the distance a little more, maybe even behind her arm since her arm seems to be the foremost part of the drawing. But your coloring is good on it. And someone already said this, but make the face more feminine on the second one.
mommy whats that lady doing with her hand down her pants ? really nice the only thing that i can see thats wrong is er other hands but i know hands are bitches to draw
-Sinn-: thanks man i'll work on it.... The only thing that catches me on yours is her tits and mouth. They're flopped to there own sides while she's arching her back, when a gal's in that pose they look like teardrop shaped (not sagging mind you) for tits that big the slop should start at the collar bone. Her mouth just looks like a circle, try making her bite her lip or make the mouth a gumdrop shape, circle mouths look flat and for an anime-esc look it doesn't work to have a 2 d mouth on her.... Here's something new:
sin-looks good but theres something wrong with her head/neck murphy-dope idea i like it alot keep it up
Sinn....Not feeling the circle lips and the left hand is kinda fucked. Murphy..Not a huge fan of this one. Specifically the head. Just a page full of shit. crits welcome View attachment 510309
hey kaiser what pens you use man? the colours (im a brit) are sick i love the hand at the back of the bird and the creepy stone guy on the left everything else just seems a bit generalised although i like the hats =P
I use everything I got. Too cheap to buy a full, set, I've got a couple of everything.... Sharpie, Micron, Pentel, Touch, Prisma, Copic, Deco, Sharpie paint, Chartpak, Pilot,...some of the background is a shitty watercolor set ive got, but the yellow, green, blue, pink streaks all over are just copics that I fucked around with a colorful blender.
Kaiser - That's awesome. Love the bird in the lower right corner. It just screams acid trip. You could lost in there for hours. Wanted to try this guy out on concrete. I had some trouble getting the proportions right. Which they aren't at all. I thought it'd be easier to do it bigger than the practice canvas I built but it didn't seem it. Did it with a NY Fat.
gtfo you fucking piigggg!!!! is there a mod reading this pm me i'll prve the asshole is a fucking cop
Tryp those tentacles are fresshhhhh View attachment 511307 Bored as fuck and scheming on the outside world
Those tentacles are ill...watercolor? Fetusr, I really like the style you used, but not the idea of the character. just my 2 cents Work in progress View attachment 511309