def either make ur fade a crispy clean line or fade it better

 

i would say clean thos lines up, and try and keep the same letter density. and stick to more simple fill until you can work a can a little better

 

thanks for the tips.

yeah it was my first time trying out that E, i dont like it much.

and im working on fades, havent had much practice.. a friend showed me how to do them but i still gotta work on it.

 

get rid of the thing on the k
do a solid out line dont not canect all your letters
get rid of eny on them little add ons
do a solid fill ( one color for now)
work on your 3d
sketch soem more in a book
and get some better bars cus i am not feeling the D's

 

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heres a throwy, i tried to fade it as best i could, i think the fade turned out better than the other piece i posted. i fucked up the E but and i should of outlined it in a second colour i think.

 

get a new d

draw on papper and post in the bb thread
you need to stop paint for a lil bit you are wastin mad paint

 

I think Woon is a big time pro and he's just takin' us all for a rrriiiiiiidddddddee.

 

smokeitup, i think your getting those nasty flares underneath because you tilt the can down as you do the bottom of the letters, either change the cap or keep the can strate.
and yeah, that you need to work on that D. BUT dont ever stop painting, if you wanna improve can control you have to keep going. but sketch more.

 

sig that shit

 

I think your D is good, its original. However, the spike for the middle extension of the E comes out of nowhere. Matching your letters in size is important, as is matching in composition of angles and lines. Not only the E but the K is a different style.
Keep progressing and keep learning and you will build your own style.

 

the e and K do not flow with the other letters, The D is pretty whack looks like a fucked up W. Sketch awhile. Post in the black book thread, try some exchanges and see what other people do for some ideas. Just don't paint for awhile. You don't really need practice as the paint is decently clean. you need to learn letters

 

i did this for my friend

mike muir
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this is not ment to be in toy bombs/pieces

 

yeah it is, maybe intermediate level but its got its flaws, looks dope dude.

 

heh thanks

yeah its on three panels, and i had to paint it 2 at a time, so i had to switch em out, thats why some stuff is shifted around, like on the bottom of the K

 

first attempt, few colourways. thoughts? sorry about the shit picture quality

 

Black book thread for all sketchs

 

oops thought i posted there, sorry

 

VAS by me.






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