T's definetely wandering off. And the R is a little bigger. I'm gonna' start using my limbs as point of reference for measure. Like use my arms length or length of both them open, etc... The fill...I dunno'. Just had some extra paint sittin' around. Cotton candy, I guess.
heres somethin i done tonight, i smoked before i went so thats why i think it turned out so shitty. but i tried to keep it simple.... [Broken External Image]:http://i883.photobucket.com/albums/ac31/smokeitup421/DSC02164.jpg got the fill done, had to use another colour because i ran out of that purple halfway through... [Broken External Image]:http://i883.photobucket.com/albums/ac31/smokeitup421/DSC02165.jpg then got the outline done... [Broken External Image]:http://i883.photobucket.com/albums/ac31/smokeitup421/DSC02166.jpg and added white as a second outline. i know im toy but i keep painting (practice makes perfect), and try to paint atleast once a week.
Gotta work on your can control. Hit the books a bit more before you paint. rewt-that fill reminds me of the stuff you did with anion lol.
it looks sloopy.if it wasnt , it would of looked better.but your way better then me , so imma give you props anyway.
smokeitup, color choice. your letters looked blurred together and dont POP. becuase of color choice! i know you want those letters to pop. you know you want those to pop. so lets let them pop light color fill, strong dark color outline. try a classic black and white, or light blue and black. try it man
Couldn't agree more. I noticed you use white for outlines a lot. Going with dark fills and light outlines can make your eyes see it opposite and fight for control. Like Sher said, try a light fill with a dark outline. It's more natural as far as depth and shadow are concerned. Go with a solid color for the fill. No more halfsies for a while. Use simple letter structre for now. That K needs the most work. To answer your question, it says 'Don't hate the straight'. It's kinda' squished together and bars in the way. Empty - Yeah, except this fill isn't as crazy...
lol is that a joke? put in work in your book for a good month then come asking for crits. graffiti is not a hobby.
Get rid of the drip and the highlights. Work on defining your E to make it look more like an E. The bars have to go a little deeper into the letter. Get rid of the $ sign. SUAVE, right? Just go simple for now. Take your time.
First attempt at 3D with simple letters. It needs major improvement. There was 3D on the left side of the 'W' until I cut too close. Looking for crits on how to keep the same angle going for the 3D. I understand the vanishing point thing but need help on keeping each and every line at let's say, exactly 45' or 30' for each bar...
Well I think the best way to do it (if your drawing) Is to keep your hand in one place and just move the paper. Painting.....It'll probably just come over time. btw that fill is lol