slip, that one's a throwup... its not that good. you know what they're supposed to be and what they're supposed to look like, how the curves work and everything. but you need to get some inspiration if youre aboutta try some for yourself. youre not ready yet. keep doing stuff like the simp in the last flick, and practice them heaps.
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thanks moganone illegal drugs, you need more work on letters. the only ok looking ones are the R and A in the first flick
Wooord, that bubble font looks ill, man, props. Your throw steez is fucking asssss though, dude. Seems to me you haven't changed your throw in like a year. Something also tells me that you should listen to your advice, and get some new inspiration for throws, 'cause your flow's insanely bad.
you like the bubble font, but not my "throw steez"? which is the one you don't like? because the silver throw in that photo isn't mine.
I'm talking about the throw that's under the EPS in the second flick. The flow was super off, and the style just looks mad generic. I think you should just be a writer that lays down straights, and pieces. 'Cause to me, that's the only thing I've seen progress like an entire year.
the throw is kind of whatever my man... didnt really focus at all, it's about 45ft long too... so I basically had NO concept of what I was doing or where the lines were ending up. all I cared for was emptying the cans that were in my hands at the time. I'm posting the flick just for the shits. I know it's not a good throw. but thanks for the comment anyway
not that it hasn't been said a ton of times before. but how sad is that all these dope color schemes, fills and backgrounds are being wasted on such letters? it's a real shame... I mean look at that third flick! fuck! flatscank! how can you NOT do anything about it? who in his sane mind wouldn't do EVERYTHING in his power to fix it??
[/url][/IMG] word scank got those steez fills with weird extensioned letters, but dope characs. Trying new E, crits? i know its not clean
The middle bar of the E should come out a little more to "meet" the B. The D needs a hole in it, and top hole in the B should be a little lower, as well as the bottom. The top of the T should be lower to meet the rest of the piece. Do that over and over again until your can control is so good that you can fill a letter to the point of not seeing behind it, without dripping.
your drop shadows off, the bottom of the T in particular. but the man above me stated the obvious. the line on the bottom of your U. have that come from the spine of your U then drop into the curved bar, rather than the curved bar go into the spine. if that makes sense. your D is not flowing the same angle as the rest of your letters either. keep it up though
cool thanks guys this ones from like 2 weeks ago, i left the holes out on purpose. mostly the same, just wanted to post it [/url][/IMG]