I would have to say that the letters should overlap a bit. Also, some of the letters seem to be further apart then others. If you are going to leave a space between letters I think you should atleast make the size of the spaces consistant. The colouring seems somewhat sloppy, and if the second letter is an "A" it doesnt look like one, it looks more like an "H". I hope that helped.
ahh very nice, original style. lovin it. you could try make the middle bar of the N like the kick on the R, might make it fit in more with the style
bloom -thats illin boobies-start over toosick-is your name a?finish that shit first day on the job with ma new name napkin in mcdonalds wich explains the chicken nugget in the corner fucking new names are hard to get used to
Not feeling the E on the last two sketches..Top is too fat. View attachment 340926 This is old..As you can see 2002...I forgot i had it...I stopped sketching for ages..so yeah.
Here is a quick throwie. once i get money ill post painted walls. [Broken External Image]:http://img149.imageshack.us/img149/1286/pict1803vv4.jpg
camer: looks solid, but the top of those 3 e's doesnt flow well twisties: sloooww down bloom: keep workin on it, got potential havent been on my throw game couple spots where the drunk got me aka the tag had to darken it, my scanner didnt pick up the color to good
Just fuckin around i think all of em are shit cept the K and R on the right side [Broken External Image]:http://i264.photobucket.com/albums/ii167/NualaRuddell/DSCN0175.jpg [Broken External Image]:http://i264.photobucket.com/albums/ii167/NualaRuddell/DSCN0174.jpg [Broken External Image]:http://i264.photobucket.com/albums/ii167/NualaRuddell/DSCN0179.jpg
Yea i dont think im gonna get into throwies anyways. most people are used to looking at the typical throwie styles. Sen: If your gonna get into throwies you need a lot of work man, and with your handstyles you can tell when you stop while writing your name.
Twisties- you need to use bars & do simples Haze - nice. i actualy like the E, but everyone's right, it dosnt go with the rest of the peice. Cyto- i like the k, but the R dosnt speak to me. Bloom- i like the first peice, w/ the green boubles. but def change the N so it matches. [Broken External Image]:http://img232.imageshack.us/img232/8927/jabblockbusteruz9.jpg I feel like the B is kinda weird, but i don't know what to do w/ it.
who wants in the dope toys collab ! all it basically is , is a loada the better heads in the toys forum get togther and do a peice of theyre name...and then I ( anyone ) simply cuts and pastes them into Photoshop where theyll all be put togther...thats what id do...but i was hoping someone with ill photoshop skills could add some sort of background to it etc. ,,, you feel me...kinda like a Team Battle where all the peices get put togther... Scans preferd !...but try to do decent photo ! colours : ANY ! variety counts millions ! Up to now we have ! ( plus im getting writers from outta BS to contribute ) * UPDATE * Toui ! Baze ! Amk ! Sezie ! Asen ! Glock ! Sex ! Cher ! Raby Baby ! Rank ! Sewerst ! Revid ! Dawse ! ZofOne ! Sketch ! EmJayBee ! Azteca ! Bastardo ! Teezem ! Niccsacc ! Sumoe ! Garbage ! Sen ! Akel ! Fail ! -- okay guys..im mad sorry...but iv had huge amounts of shit on the past 4 days...and iv not been able to get to the comp to look at shit feel me...so what i want is...for everyone who is in on the collab ^...get their peices PM'd to me by 17th of Febuary...i aint takin in no more people. Haze..dont feel any of em...the style is played imo..also reminds me of CHER...esp. the C..but whatever...the R's need work too. Sen..ill !!!!! handys great great work !
jab- keep your shit the same size and learn to draw straight lines edit- ^^^i know i'm not one of the better toys but can iget in on it? a really wurly fire throwie... oh and sorry my markers are getting dry er and i'm getting poor er [Broken External Image]:http://img144.imageshack.us/img144/308/fireeyksonegh0.jpg [Broken External Image]:http://img147.imageshack.us/img147/8881/eyksblueylb3.jpg
View attachment 341003 View attachment 341004 View attachment 341005 View attachment 341006 sez- the simples look good, but im not feeling the throw. i guess theres nothing really wrong with it, besides the r, i just dont like the style. jab- on the right track, but keep your bars the same size and width for now. sen- props for being able to pull off a B in a throw.