Fable - thats looking alright, but ur F looks too small in comparison to the otehr letters. Try connectign the top and bottom of the e, and work on the l a bit more dim- that looks really good, i love the fill. maybe just lessen up on whats happenin with teh letters, it looks like too much going on in too small a spce. Peor - Coloring and 3d if you do it si gonna be a bitch on taht piece haha. i liek it thoh, nice and simple, earthworm idea is cool. maybe if you made it earthworms and cookies or summin, thatd be interesting Heres some new stuff, trying out diff backgrounds/colors/styles [Broken External Image]:http://i147.photobucket.com/albums/r304/KoreTwo/scan00041.jpg
dim that piece is fucking illy, all that i would work on is with the r, where the bottom of the loop and the right leg meet, id make em form into one bar as apposed to two. also maybe mess with E's cuz it seems to be your most basic letter. View attachment 350821 View attachment 350822 bumph.
Fable- your extension off the F doesn't match your E....Change the left so of a to point out....why is your B rounded?....Why is the top part of the E inward like that? Fix those things and come back. dim- now that it's filled i do see that it needs a little work as far as bending your bars but not too much... xyk- nice fill, if that's an E at the end, experiment with fixing it up.
dimr make the leg on your r higher up and the bottem bar of ur e the same width as the top fregana your letters are to close together spread em apart little wepon go a little simpler ur letters are ok tho over sick as allways fable dont write fable cause there is already a writer that writes that. make ur piece straighter and ur bars stright in stead of diagonal like on ur f i need some helpfull critzz on this
give this dude his props, he's progressing the right way. startin with simples and workin step by step to more advanced stuff. perfect example. i wish more of these dudes would follow you... keep it up
POWWW. i ant been on here in a looooooongggg time. this is my 2nd sketch in about 4 months, this explains why i havent progressed at all. PC4PC??//LOL over, the e r on the top one needs sortin and the o+v is nicey. bottom sketch is nice.
seriously kid change your fucking name my brother burns you [Broken External Image]:http://i33.photobucket.com/albums/d99/-syke-/KASP.jpg nuff said that kasp kills u
bump. only like one cat gave me a crit. guys got ne? emo kid- looks sweet sheltr- dude in general it looks cool but try splitting letters up so its not one big chunk. and out line in pen and give it a little color. dim- nice colors little weapon- dude dont worry about extensions right now. it looks like you have alright letters. just work on letters for now. fable- kinda cool, but i think the Es a little weak. add some 3d
get off that man's nuts long as you aint in the same city it dont matter haha aint no seriously, its the internet...