omgosh.. -_-
read some of the new to graff thread dude.. youre trying to do simples but at the same time youre trying to put to much style into it but you cant..>_>

 

fube the framed pieces are mad nice, the forcefield catches your eye

infoe, make your E more E like, it looks like a C
kick, make your bars straight, the squiggle lines look wack. and try puttint the shadow on a 45 degree angle or something, cuz the flat shadows make it look boring.

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i dont htink hes using bars jetpack.....

 

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New style I'm trying.More to come later.

Kence that's alright but simplify the K and tone it down just a little bit.

 

who knows, maybe he thought he was

 

it looked quite good first time around now i h8 it...start again. cheers for the crit

 

i got really bored so i white washed my table and pit a simple on the controler is there for size its not great i fucked up on the Z and E
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lol look at ur slippers..

 

Jetpack- I think the top cross-bar of your b gets to skinny
Drakula- I like the new style but I think you still have a few problems. In the first one, the first bar on the r looks a tad to small. And I think you should extend the circular part of the R like you do with the b and the heart. I like the second one, my only suggestion is maybe changing the direction the extension of the bottom of the left of the r, having that thing jut out on the other side so it doesnt overlap the other leg.
Cerex- a great simple!

A lot of girls have been asking me to do graffiti of there name so this one says Andrea:

 

infoe - your H looks like a K

rad moon boots jenZzzZZZz. but for real, the J is fatter than the rest and the heights are off. its not horribly bad though

jetpack, the top of the B doesnt flow with the rest of it and i can see what you wanted to do with the L but idk. your simples are making their way though

 

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Drakula- I like the new style

bump cuz I got no critz

 

i like that snair, nice and simple, i would personally make the s and r less curvy to match the a more though, im loving that a

heres some new shit, just a pencil sketch with a hint of color, i havent had much time to draw lately hopefully ill get some more time this week

 

scream_ looks hot son. i can kinda c some elements of my style forming into yours

 

thanks, i really cant see it though, mind pointing it out?

 

its not much but i noticed that u are starting to use lots of seperate bars. i have too, and these doo hickies i pointed out in the pick. its not even close to a bite so dont think im calling you out
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oh alright, ive been doing shit like that for a while now. its all good

 

thats fire scream.
nice hands too!

 

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