Thrice I'm really likin number 5, but I still think you could do a little extra with the M
and do you think if I curved the path to the K in more it would start to come together a bit better?

 

Ya im in the process of adding style slowly while maintaining strong flow and structure. I tend to get carried away. bankz, the tag itself is funny or what i write?

 

yeah, work off of number 5.


panik-try not even connecting any letters at all, just add a little flow to them, you just gotta play around with each letter. try and even write the letter a different way than you normally do. like write your A a different way(example; if you start your A's from the left leg, start from the right leg & see how it comes out.), if you get what im saying. just gotta fuck around. you'll come across something new with each letter.

 

thanks man I'll try it out

 

Tried to straighten up the first one and used a new E and It looks squished cus I was using a piece of paper.

Says TESONE
Crits?

 

panik, youre one of the few people on here, ive seen, that take crits in a good way, and actually try to develop your style off of what other experienced writers give you advice on.


tes-make your O and your N next to each other instead of on top. your E in ONE is bump though. so is your other E & your S.

 

thats good advice man, im getting yours up in a minute

 

I tried moving the n next to the o in that one any better?
and probably sounds dumb but what do you mean by bump?

 

I tried a halo around the down arrow under the I,
haha as oyu can see I failed
I won't do the thing I did with the N and the K anymore cas I don't like how it looks
-- New p? good/bad
(btw thanks gene i find my A is a little more defined from your hint)
Crits

 

wow, sorry for double posting but that looks brutal.
my pencil sketch was much better i dragged my marker to much

 

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haha mine are sooo shitty

 

Not huge with the T, and i'd lose that N and K overlap on the top of the I. At least take away the N's extension.
Crits please

 

Mid right is look fucken chill man
and yea I don't even know why I overlapped it
haha but it's a P
haha keep workin ur flow man it's getting soo sick

 

Panik your p's getting there but it looks too much like a T everything else is nice though

 

should I lose the halo completely or tidy it up?

 

curve it down alittle like that ^^^ your getting there, keep playing with it

 

alright thanks alot man

 

This is what I came out with,
under the underline it says 705, my area code it would look neater but I wrote this kinda small
any final crits before I hit the hay XD

 

its better but i would still point it down alittle more. make the top right side longer then the bottom right side