they are aright other then the halo. write your tag over and over, each time you write it you will get better and better

 

I didn't like the halo either
and alright thank you for your all day advice haha
peace man

 

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Panik-personally i think you should add accessories last, that way you can concentrate on structure, flow and style.

 

i like the top right one, the a is fire

 

Yeah I'd go with top right too


Crits on mine?
Oh and don't worry I didn't actually "tag" this up, it's on a wall on the side of my friends porch that he was knocking down at the time so i figured perfect time to practice on something other than paper/wood/cardboard

 

thrice- top right with bottom right m

 

thanks guys for the crit, i'll keep practicing it.
CCWN-id lose the extension on the bottom of the Cs. Also is that what you write, or a crew or something? As a graffiti name, im not seeing too much flow from it.

 

sewn its not bad butkeep plying with it to get some flow

 

haha...thrice...it says Sewn...

sewn-dont make your S & your E look so much alike.

 

lol speaking ofyour name SEWN..

theres this kid around where i live that tags REWN..as in he ruins shit...

 

ur E kinda looks like a CL, but it's pretty good otherwise

 

A one-liner would be dope for your name Sewn....

Just gotta make those letters more rounded

 

Thanks guys, I'll keep working on it. I just don't know what to do with the W and N.
And I'll try to change up the E

 

I was bored here you go... Maybe I'll hit up a Ahem and Sewn if I feel like it later

 

still lookin really weak, I'm still needing some direction for the V, and i need to buy a new marker. Any recomendations to get some nice crisp edges but a hot ass rounded chisel tip style.

 

Here you go guys...

 

That's so tight!
What do you use to write them, a tablet?

 

Pen Tool In Illustrator it really helpful when manipulating strokes to put them right where you want them... I'm a graphic designer so it is easier for me to, plus I like practicing on the computer so I don't waste paper or Blackbook space... I do want a tablet however so I can practice my hand strokes for quick writes out around the neighborhood, just need to save up some cash because I've spent a bunch on Montana Spraypaint and Deco Marker's

 

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