the character is an influence from my friend bien's characters but it doesn't really look like his cause his are good hahahaha
Vowels- keep it simpler man like this [Broken External Image]:http://img505.imageshack.us/img505/1927/dscn0381zp6.jpg [Broken External Image]:http://img505.imageshack.us/img505/1927/dscn0381zp6.39f11244ac.jpg
kay honestly, you kids really really really need to crit when you post flicks. this is gettin ridiculous, 6 or 7 people have posted pictures without giving any crits. GIVE CRITS TO GET CRITS!!
Quickie Zofism piece is nice, feelin the concept just needs some space and consistency pie- I always like this style, only thing i can say is it'd look better with the highlight in the 3-D imo the end- delete one of the posts and maybe fix up the M and resize the I next time fonone- i like them but i feel the N is weak on the big one, maybe make the extension smaller and the right leg taller a bit Rhyse- looks like a good start, it'll be interesting to see how you elaborate on that, there's a lot of potential in doing a person Aloha- It's got some really good parts, but some of it is kinda off, so idk, it's good at any rate. Cyto- A little more time checking the angles of the 3-D and keepin things cleaner would help it out a bunch Vowels- I like some of it but the letter structure is kinda week, the tag is nice but it's kinda off on the end with the L-S lookin like a K
though I would add a little bit of like tattooish-ness to it lol itchy and scratchy comic book, wooooooordd. MY CRITS, SO PEOPLE DON'T BITCH Duct Tape - The "ofi" are different than the z,s, and m but I still like it. The End - I like your handstyle but not how the m and a are facing upwards and the r and t are facing down. Fonone - I like it all except for the block letters on the first page. So sick though. Rhyse - King read says it's wack, but I love your shit, always. Rock band tn! hahah Aloha - Shit's bangin' Cyto - I'm not really feeling the SUPER simple letters but they are clean and look nice at least. Tech - It reminds me a lot of hepos because of the colours and the fact that the outline is similar to fill so it doesn't really pop out at you. Keep sketching though, I can see you being a west-coast style kind of person in the future.
nah, i was just throwing that out there in general. but, it would be cool if you threw one or two half ass crits even if your not lookin for any in return. vois, your letters are getting better. but id watch the red filling on the inside of your O and S, if your gonna fill up the holes with the same color as your outline, id add a shadow for the rest of it too, cuz what it kinna looks like to me is that the middle of your letters are shadowed while, the outside of your letters arnt. i'd also watch your flow just a lil bit, your OIS is cool but id bring up the left bar on your V a bit to match the flow good job on the amount of crits vowels, the only reason im bitch is cuz no one else is, an ive noticed the crits have been gettin mad wack an lazy. for your first sketch, id keep all the letters the same size , and i wouldnt make the bottom of all of your letters smaller than the top, that leaves you with a lot of deadspace on the bottom half of your piece, makes it lack if ya get what im sayin. your second sketch is much better, thats what you should be aiming for. decent concept on bars and lines, but with your O id put a hole in there. just to clarify that it is an O. EDIT: i fucked up lookin at your sketches, the first ones good, where the second one needs work. put it together from there good job with the critiqing too cheers
im rave905 but my old account is fuct so idk View attachment 357091 vois - i dunlike the scratch force vowels - that icey 1 is dope id like 2 c that painted but i think ur shine on the o shouldnt go under the w rhyse - nice pen charac love the lips but not that hair so much aloha - nah thats dope foneone - yeah i like the top one most
:rave: I like the colors but the peice lacks structure in the Rs, try making all bars the same and heres a skeleton of something im working on, crits wanted pweese [Broken External Image]:http://img142.imageshack.us/img142/711/dscn0383wk2.jpg
yeah fo sho, I think im going to make the A pop out instead of being overlapped by both the T and R vois- ok I like it, just make the bubble bars cleaner and fix the s
vois- start over with straight letters, use bars. read the new 2 graff if u havent. most recent thing in my book, started sketching again. crits?
EXCHANGES!!! fuck 3d morne- i'm likin that, maybe just make the bottom leg of ur r come off of the top one more if u get what i mean vois- listen to morne cyto- really feelin that except for the squiggly line on the r, but other than that dope! i also just posted our exchange in the exchange thread raver- go even simpler, just like straight bars. alson work on ur structure cuz it lokks likt it says rayer vowels- i dig em both, just not the banner on the first one irekn- great use of bars, really fresh man
see how much better it is when every crits everyone! we all improve! raver, work on keeping your lines and letters straight, your letters kinna bob up an down. keep them in a straight line, if you cant do that, than before you start sketching, grab a ruler an draw a faint line, an draw ontop of that. fix your V, it looks like a Y, take out that tail at the bottom. and id fix your last R, it dosent look as clean as the first. what markers do you use? tare, id take it a slight step backwards. dont add as much steeze, id work on your A and R the most. your T covers too much of the left bar on your A and id also bring the right bar of your A down a bit more. id also try bringing down the left bar on your R just a bit. your E's tight though. vois that looks better, but honestly, id start thinking outside the box a bit. your letters arnt making that much improvement because youve been chasing the same style. fuck curves until youve got nice lookin lines. keep your letters the same size, and start adding a drop shadow to it, workin on that will make your overrall sketch better. silentchaos, im not feelin the sharp edges, try smoothening them out and see how that will look. an loose those hook things you got on the bottom of your M, try making it more like the legs on your R. good job on the bars, you kinna fucked up the bars on the R a bit with the widths, but other than that it looks good. seywhat, that fable piece looks pretty ill, but imo you should sketch near the bottom cuz then it could cut off parts of your letters, like your B. also watch the height of your letters, the A is much shorter than the E. the camer piece is a nice set of simples too, if your gonna have one leg longer than the other though on your letters, make sure the right leg on all your letters is the same length, rather than different lengths. i rushed the camer crits cuz i need to shit one
seywhat- damn bro...im really likin those fills...those r clean man morne- pretty dope structure u got goin, maybe u should try adding a lighter color around the outside tho to make it stand out better vois- listen to the guys above, start out simpler bro cyto- that sketch is DOPE man... definitely gotta see that when its done, the only thing i was thinkin is maybe changing the round top of the R to something that would match the rest of the letters a little better vowels- those r nice and clean, the only thing i would suggest is to make the letters on the second one closer to eachother anyway, heres a throwie-ish thing i jus did today... [Broken External Image]:http://i112.photobucket.com/albums/n188/HighOctane89/Dozin-1.jpg crits? thanks