Soft the glares, or little fireworks...might need some work. But im diggin it.
And Cues...that shit is definately fresh. Lovin the fills.

 

those simps are dope mad props

 

oh and on ur last pic ur a is kinda screwd up u shoulda centers the line its of to the left to much

 

lookin for some crits on my Freestyle steez....
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Nice work wine, i like your paintjobs!

 

that wine shit is tight, Cues is dope but to tell you the truth i would really like to see those with a solid fill... he does that shit clean but it feels like it takes away from the letters.

 

originalhomeboy - daammmm as smokey would say. shits dope. i like the dark piece with the wine red. shits fresh.

 

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critz?

 

o sorry about that.
Biggs- looking nice work on that E a bit, and the 2nd letter, can't make it out.

 

Ahem- Wrong Section

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Any crits on this shit?

 

Bumping it again

 

??KEEP?? theres a Keep6 from SDK and UAT crew who is mad sick. if thats your buddy who writes that, i advise you to tell him cause keep6 is wellllllllll known

http://www.youtube.com/Stompdown
^^ you can find his videos in there hundreds of vids
he's got quiet a bit there

 

there is probably alot of keeps

 

no not really man,
heres a video of keep6 doing his thing,
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=eIQJwniATlY

he has done alot better things
he is also in the seventh letter crew

 

my tag

ok so this is my tag its like my most recent i kno its not good i just really want advice on how to make it better... any advice

 

work on keeping your lines cleaner

 

I havent wrote in a while, im getting back into it after a year hiatus. Tonight ima graph up this wall near my house in a vacant lot, pretty secluded so i can take my time. Here is something i did on my PC, shitty mouse though... Let me know what you guys think though.


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i'm not feeling it masr, keep working on it, try a different style maybe

 

i know i already posted one a few up from this but ok now i know i suck dont even worry about that im just trying to figure out how to get better than these got any ideas?