...why..? The first one eh I fucked it up, but the second one is a little bubbly, but umm...yeah still looks fine... Why is it that EVERY time someone screws up a piece they say "NEW TO GRAFF THREAD NOW", like honestly I have read that front to back, and almost every other tutorial on this site, and I've posted stuff that is quite well I think, one blunder and you try to push me back to square one, fucks with that....whatever yeah.
my bad,cant figure how to make this shit smaller. racked some new marks.Lumcolors an Prismacolor Premiers.lovin em so far. Been up late in the lab. fucked the N but like the rest.read NoMas.
fOrSaQeN- haha,yo nice sticker >_> umm,too many colors in my opinion. its good but the colors are a bit much. the S looks a lil to squiggly. keep it up. Capo Izi- get yourself some new markers.got a staples near by?the one in my city is easy as fuck to rack from.you can get some better markers free.first one is kinda wack,2nd would be good with better colors,jus my opinion.practice your As an Ps.thought it said CHP at first.keep it up.
can we get some REAL crits?everyone always says that shit,"new to graf thread" fuck man be precise.Ill check the thread but show that you know what your talking about.
yeah seriously....great input they got..every one that crits my shit tells me letter structure....but fails to point out what exactly i should be improving on so i could be working at it.. simply 'new to graff' doesnt say shit..
BARS... TO EVERYONE ON THIS PAGE.... except capo... make all you letters the same height bars same length and width... CRITS... new dubba yew. View attachment 364420
I doubt I woulda figured out it was a W on my own. maybe if it was a more head on angle? interesting work to peep any way you cut it though.
have either of fairys actually read the new to graff thread, cuss if u did then why aeu sayin u dont get advice
no need to be smart son. it says alot. it says you need to COMPLETELY START OVER, your colours are whack, your letters are shit. your lines are all shaky. you have shitty random extensions jumping off random parts of your lettters. the back ground is ugly as fuck. you are missing several highlights. there you go. some nice crits for you. im sure you would have preffered to have heard "new to graff thread"
You're right faggot, try not getting so asshurt and consider someone telling you to go to the 'new to graf' thread as giving you all the crits in that thread because you actually suck SO bad you can't play in the TOY thread. Same for you forsaqen. But I was actually being nice and directed you to the proper thread.
I realize this now after I finish that ir probably is a REALLY bad Atlok bite....probably just because I see his stuff so much it just inspired me, and yeah if this is so bad I'll stop it and go back to normal, otherwise is this ok, or good? Crits pleassssseeeeeeee??? addiciton-clean that shit up, and make the letters more like bars, its all too much at once. forsaqen-cool bubble effect and ok look, but straighten 'em up more, and make them more to flow and fit together littlerockey-thats NICCEEE and clean, good straight letters awesome colors and mad flow, love it atlok-well what can I say, your shit is pretty advance, why you still in here? desipher-thats pretty nice sketch there, I do like it, the cracks are just the right amount, and it has a nice morbid creepy look, some neutral colors would look badass in it duct tape-the first two are pretty nice, except don't do that random extension between W and A, the bottom one, it's just too random and unnessesary(sp?). The last one isn't a freestyle, just a cool little throw, clean it up and it'll be much more liked and pure looking backdoor-the top 3 are fucking steeze, especially the guts, thats just dope man, keep doing your thing dude. The last one is ok, but eh...
how does that resemble atloks shit... infact how does that resemble anythign. seriously youd be doing us all a big favour if you went to the new to graff thread. it will save us telling you to go there and tbh doing shit like that your doing yourself more harm than good.
i think you should do the same there tiger.... if theres anything worse..is a toy critiquing another toy.....YOU HAVE NO SKILLS TO BEGIN WITH, rots on another hand does so he can get away with it... http://www.bombingscience.com/graffitiforum/showpost.php?p=1070442&postcount=72