kroc, i dont know what it is about your sketches. but they really piss me off. do block letters man. cuz that steeze aint workin for ya.

 

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i dont understand why ur trying to dis or make fun of other people when u suck ass

 

umm actually im not i just said ill do his name in simples so he understands wht they mean bout simples
and jetpack im not gonna do blocks but im gonna go simpler

 

you cant even do simples well yourself. he's just gonna mix his steeze in with yours. then he's got the worst of both worlds...

 

ok girls stop post pictures or crit mine

 

jet i can do simples i did those for a while then got to this i dunno if your trying to be an ass hole or just help but ok
panda its dope i really like your style

 

thanks

 

Did you not read what I said?

I just said I've done tons of simples and post many on here and people said it was ok, NOW I'm experimenting, I still do simples all the time to just better structure I just don't post them, I'm experimenting to learn what to do and what not to do and to find a style I can improve on....

I'm saying that the whole "Stick to Simples" or whatever comment is so overplayed now because people don't now the history of the writers(like if they just started experimenting and have done thousands of simples), and it seems they only do it so that they are giving out crits, so that in return they receive crits.

Like cheating the system, they just say stick to simples, or thats dope to everyone so that they in return get some crits.


And dude...I KNOW WHAT SIMPLES ARE....

Look back at my posts in this thread I have about 10 posted colored simples, the rest of my 100 to 200 odd simples I've done are in pencils and maybe pen, but I don't color cause they're just for practice.

Here are two..



(This is simple, has a few little stuff but still simple)




And if you meant a throw up bubble letter thing then here..

 

csto i commented your already
and ya capo i understand i get it alot now tht i read tht i understand wht u mean and wht your doin
and ive only been writing for 3 and a half months so i think im doin pretty good or going at a good pace

 

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a throw my buddy did in my bbook CRITS

 

ctso, im diggin the top. just make all your bars the same width. the bars on the P and R are smaller than they should be. i like that O, it flows well with that steeze youve got going on

 

Yeah ctso you got some good flow starting up, with all that wavy shit that will work better later on, I'd say though just work on your 3D you're missing a few lines, and some are a littel wobbly, also the bottoms of all the pieces should all be on the same level

 

its pretty dope imo panda i like the k and r they flow good

 

i didnt do it my friend KROWER did hes pretty much has the sickest throw ive eva seen

 

ctso if u mean bars i did them for a while then i started doin sum other stuff like i said though im gonna go simpler


edit i guess not well i will now looks ok just clean it up a little

 

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cais im not feelin it i like the colors thoughs just dunno sumthing off bout it

 

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