Forsaqen - not feelin ur throw just dont seem consistant an try makin the bottom of ur S heavier its to top heavy and sets it off balance Glyce - work on ut handstyle lil to loopy Panda - not feelin the S seems to thin i say simple it up a bit with no sharp curves and thinkin it View attachment 367191 crits?
bump any more critick on this one ^ & the new stuff [Broken External Image]:http://i224.photobucket.com/albums/dd224/rsakens/DSC00018-6.jpg?t=1209239671 few quick sketches [Broken External Image]:http://i224.photobucket.com/albums/dd224/rsakens/DSC00019-5.jpg?t=1209240269 [Broken External Image]:http://i224.photobucket.com/albums/dd224/rsakens/DSC00020-5.jpg?t=1209240323 [Broken External Image]:http://i224.photobucket.com/albums/dd224/rsakens/DSC00023-2.jpg?t=1209240350
if its a painted piece battle. im down. if its a sketch, ignore me. evade, thats startin to look good, i like how you brought your letters closer, your piece needed that. the char is meh though
colored in ps: [Broken External Image]:http://img166.imageshack.us/img166/2246/against2copyrd3.png rsakens -- love the simple style. 1st train sketch is hot, specially the A and N. K should be a little bigger though atomik -- letters are too jagged and disjointed. simplify. love the char atlok, and the blue pen piece.
aieet just send the pics to meeeee pm me befor u do it black book or canvas either way crits please View attachment 367215
Ignore the stuff on the top of the page: [Broken External Image]:http://img175.imageshack.us/img175/5313/041508114404gp4.jpg I'm still learning I used to write in just boxes. Now I tried to change it a little bit.
probly the best stuff i seen yet from you capo. don't get me wrong though, you aren't at paint level yet keep fucking with it. especially the P