[Broken External Image]:http://img148.imageshack.us/img148/959/cimg7633ai9.jpg [Broken External Image]:http://img208.imageshack.us/img208/3546/cimg7631iq4.jpg some sloppy stuff on my part..the first pic is a werkinprogress.
its been more than 30 minutes, i already finished mine but swivel hasn't even come on on since then, this is my entry [Broken External Image]:http://i151.photobucket.com/albums/s154/V_Be_Me/CIMG0013.jpg crits?
freakeenyc i really like the falling one. okay before anybody says it, yeah i bit the letter structures of the green one from a generator but the rest is all me. i dont really do characters,.. thoughts?
Yeah, and cats been rockin that R(similar) for at least a decade before fezat.........he didnt create the letter....im not saying its unorifinal caz fezat is dope as fuck but you cant call that a bite......idiot..
SOANK- dosent look bad at all. watch the curve around the O, its a bit edgy, smoothen it up. and i think your letters overlap just a little bit too much. try to overlap half of the first bar rather than the whole bar. KRE8 - do simples man, thats the best way to start off. biting is a really bad habit to get into. workin on your simples an tryin to build your own steeze is the way to go. BIZAR - im not feelin the sharp edges at all. you should put holes in your B, A and R. FREAKYEENYC - not feelin the fill. the letters look good though. although the fill an green outline takes away from them imo. ATLOK - loose the crown, an the verticle bar on your I is too thick. personally i think the I is ugly as hell. been a while since i posted a sketch.. got lazy. here ya go [Broken External Image]:http://img255.imageshack.us/img255/4405/12kd5.jpg
i haven't been able to draw for weeks cais-get a normal sharpie and do a black forcefield then a colored one i think your edges would look a little better reign-keep those simps coming man very dope
BUMP!! Soank - round the bottom of ur K more to match the other letters and also round the right of ur O aswell bizar- work on those handies kre8 - simples Camer feelin it all except the top of the E and C, the C looks to much like an E Reign - Good simples rly solid not feelin the top on the N tho Cais - the I looks WAY to big ruins the piece
i finished mine in like 5 min but i had to wait so i can get a whole bunch at the same time cuz i only get 20 pix messages a month....... im uploading it now..... and wow u just took an old piece and wrote "justin is a punkass bitch" in thhe shittiest handstyle ive ever seen
View attachment 367665 View attachment 367666 View attachment 367667 ^^this 1s a freestyle wit a blue pen red pen black pen and orage highlighter it says dives...... i thought it deserved this thread tho Evasion- i think u should make a skinny part on the "S" cuz to make it kinda disrupts the flow Haze- i think u should take out the bottom turn out of the "R" cuz it looks like a "B" kinda Jetpack- i think u should make the arrows connected to the letters... mabe make a thin bar going up right next to the letters than an opening at the end.... i dont kno how to explain it Atlock- its alreadt been said but the "I" is too big Glyce- i think u should use bars Kre8- no offence but ur making my eyes bleed..... simples now crits on mine!!!
KAPLOW! bizar i rock it wit the E and bettah lol jks quickie before bed Soank - round the bottom of ur K more to match the other letters and also round the right of ur O aswell bizar- work on those handies kre8 - simples Camer feelin it all except the top of the E and C, the C looks to much like an E Reign - Good simples rly solid not feelin the top on the N tho Cais - the I looks WAY to big ruins the piece
Just showing the love ♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥ my crit to Camer [Broken External Image]:http://i246.photobucket.com/albums/gg102/CircaDrummer/2e1alja.jpg
im pretty sure he changed his name to eamer. other than the obvious two E's.. look at the handsteeze looks good though eamer/camer i like those E's. there funky. but the other letters dont really suit it as much. they look too empty compared to them