Yo brossif, are you aware that you are writing kissing in spanish?
Are you hispanic, kissing?

 

yeah bogus def try thicker letters
and atomik on the whole last names of friends piece, i like it but that first letter looks like an s not a z jus sayin
pretty fresh overall though
new stuffs
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went simple as advised

 

just a word ive been working with


tell me wut you think

 

so im the only one that digs the arrows eh.. shitty, next painted piece will be arrowless then.. saves me a bit of paint

mr. humbag, im not diggin any of your extensions, try again.

bogus, thicker letters or shorter dropshadow. the thin letters an thick dropshadow look wack imo

 

new at simples...
Humbug- Thickin up your letters abit
Session- need to go even more simple to start out with....like the ones on your key board.
Besar- not feelin the E in the second one
Bogus- not bad... i like it... just overlap the B over the O

 

I'm likin Bogus's style, and that name is awesome haha

 

very nice. But I hope you don't write Atomik, there is alreaydy a legen reepin that.

http://miamigraffiti.com/writer.php?id=atomik&p=1

 

shit i didnt noe that w.e naw im not hispanic

 

bahh humbug your e looks like the one i do now lol now calling it a bite cause i havent posted XD
edit not bah hum ment session one

 

im sick of people tellin me to do fuckin simpler shit
"like on a keyboard" like i dont know what letters already look like
i understand the basics, and have for a while now
but whenever i wanna do somethin not so simple and break away from goddamn "keyboard letters" people just keep sayin do simpler shit like on a fucking keyboard
how the fuck am i supposed to develope at all if you just want me to do the same goddamn keyboard letters over and over
honestly, and you assume i already havent done key board fuckin letters
if your gonna crit something be helpful dont give me any shit like work on keyboard letters tell me something to help me improve.

 

someones got their scrotum in a knot.

if you knew simples as well as you thought.. we wouldnt tell you to revert back to them. now would we?

you dont have to listen to anyone. do whatever you want.

 

<.< all i did was say sumthing bout the e

 

mayb if u stoped whoring on the net ud progrsess

 

im likein the simpes bogus!

 

bump... new page

 

try 2 proportion youre letterd more, like ur S is the biggets letter

 

fuckin simple enough?
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work with those... clean your lines up alil... make everything run smooth

 

man, fuck off with the bitterness. if you cant do simples then you wont be able to add any extensions or whatever wack fucking style you wanna chase. be humble or get the fuck out.

clean up your lines, watch the width between your bars. and dont rush it. they look awful just because you rushed them. take your time an they'll look good.