bump this exchange and heres a couple unfinished sketches krispy- drop the extensions, your letters are pretty good, maybe just tone it down a bit seti- dope canvas but i cant read it hoer- nice simps and bombs, i really like that peice though, e is fresh ohsnap- stick with that simp for a while, everythin else has too much goin on imo bogus- your simps are good, but try tweakin your letters some anroe- u got some dope shit, but u gotta give crits to get em man
seti - maybe put a different colored outline around each section to show where the letters are at, might be the camera but they're kinda hard to read freedom writer - i think the sharp ones look good, but how the r kicks looks a little off, maybe don't bring it in so much when it comes back down if that makes sense
yeah i dont really care ive been writing it for quite a while too, juts dont be jocking my ideas haha, jk, freedom writer i always liked your shit man i remeber you from like a looong looong time ago, i thikn the pointier p and r look better, good shit tho homie, maybe if yall lucky ill put somethign up later
View attachment 368154 And I've come to ruin it Too lazy to crit... Edit Seti those are hot, if I had anything other than a virgin's ass, I'd ask to buy 'em.
>_> Obviously you can't understand what I'm saying, nothing has been put in my butt... Anywho.... So this isn't a total waste of a post Josh, stick with that Sone piece, I like that a lot more than that other one with the huge arrows coming off of it... Neuro, that R is funky fresh. Fredom writer, looks good at first, then when you actually look, it's not too great.
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As am I. Damn, I think I should sketch more, that's like my first actual, outlined, colored piece in ever.