fame- it's flowin nice, but get rid of some of those extraneous marks, especially the dots. that stuff usually clutters up an otherwise fine tag.
Getting any better? Fame lose the dots and I'm feeing the f and the a connected but don't make that your underline, it's just too much. Reks those letters are waaaaaay too close together spread it out and let it breathe more
oh yah BI2AR it does but take out the drips ALWAYS have natural drips make it look good with out them it will surely look good with them however your A looks like a 19 work on it mate go do that in the streets take a pic and show us Im curious
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The horizontal bars on the I are a bot long.. shorten them.. and IMHO work on getting just the letters to look sweet for now. once you've nailed the letters you can nail anything.. p.s give crits to receive.