Tesoner One for my friend Emak Crits on either Trap Simple You're trying to makje your letters all great but they're not going to look good till you go back to simples. Los Looking good first one especially Hazmat I'm liking that alot
yarb-make all your letters the same size, especially your o, same with the emak, i thought it was cmak with a dodgy add on trap- write like this ,TRAP, then you can experiment sic- you'll change your name eventually, you might not know why yet but you will and stay simple is it just me or are loads of toys just posting pics asking for crits then not giving them? its like their the kind of writers that show all their mates their wack tag and they dont know what looks good and they're like 'wow,you've got a sick tag, you've got to go spray it'. not a rant, just an observation
Thanks for the advice man. And i finally get what you guys are saying by writing with simple letters and then trying stuff out after that.
not for a while. after writing it just regular, you'll begin to develop your own things... lurk around here a little more. you'll see that a clean nice tag is much more respected than a fuxored one like your rockin now.
word, no worries. heres a good example [Broken External Image]:http://img266.imageshack.us/img266/8507/img0252yx1.jpg [Broken External Image]:http://img266.imageshack.us/img266/8507/img0252yx1.24b02228e2.jpg[/QUOTE] see in this one all the style lies in the structure an flow of the letters, the way they all look the same and just fit together is what makes it good. your tag is just a bunch of jumbled parts thrown together right now. excess shit and random parts that dont flow make for a shitty tag. and please dont hit the streets for a while. keep it up though man, if you listen to what alot of us say on here and really put in the practice you can get good pretty quick. heres another good example for ya [Broken External Image]:http://img167.imageshack.us/img167/2657/tag1bs9.jpg
see in this one all the style lies in the structure an flow of the letters, the way they all look the same and just fit together is what makes it good. your tag is just a bunch of jumbled parts thrown together right now. excess shit and random parts that dont flow make for a shitty tag. and please dont hit the streets for a while. keep it up though man, if you listen to what alot of us say on here and really put in the practice you can get good pretty quick. heres another good example for ya [Broken External Image]:http://img167.imageshack.us/img167/2657/tag1bs9.jpg[/QUOTE] Oh, okay..yeah i guess after looking over mine its pretty much a bunch of shit that doesnt go together. thanks though
Oh, okay..yeah i guess after looking over mine its pretty much a bunch of shit that doesnt go together. thanks though[/QUOTE] no worries man. keep postin up your new shit. and dont take crits too hard.
Yarbles- The Emak I like. I think it would look cooler with a different E maybe? Is this more simple? Should i keep working with stuff like this and move on from here?
fuck yeah, absolutely. move the p back just a little, and make the loop of the P and R look the same. and keep praticing with that to make it even smoother
[Broken External Image]:http://i224.photobucket.com/albums/dd201/adre89/HPIM1212-1.jpg Okay I've took some of your suggestions and I've been seriously working on my tag and here is one of my recent one not satisfied yet but just need some crit to find out how I can improve it
P.S. now i took away the halo, it is much cleaner and I added 3 vertical lines in the deadspace after the I