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Discussion in 'Toys forum' started by Fube, Apr 10, 2008.

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  1. Chump

    Chump Senior Member

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    I was just saying this thread is looking rough... havent seen anything too good on the last page....i would crit yours but your picture isnt coming up on my comp...
     
  2. Mr yarbles

    Mr yarbles Elite Member

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    ai28.tinypic.com_sflco5.jpg
    Alrght thanks I did
    Here's a couple
    I kow I did the shadows wrong on the second one I was just practicing shadowing.
    Crits?

    Zeno
    Go simpler.

    evil
    I like it but the fill could be a bit better the orange coming through the blue is kinda distracting
     
  3. Kans

    Kans Member

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    ive been trying to develop my throw and this is what i have so far. crits? 27052008.jpg
     
  4. osnapizzel

    osnapizzel Banned

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    kans straighten out the top of the a and the s cause that wavy line makes it look more toy than it has to be
     
  5. Trestoner707

    Trestoner707 Senior Member

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  6. Mr yarbles

    Mr yarbles Elite Member

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    Your first t looks like a j other than that I like it
     
  7. Trestoner707

    Trestoner707 Senior Member

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  8. Mr yarbles

    Mr yarbles Elite Member

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    ai32.tinypic.com_2e1sx8n.jpg
    New t
    crits?

    Oh yeah and don't do the middle lump in your r it makes it looke like an e kinda
     
  9. osnapizzel

    osnapizzel Banned

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    his r is fine but your t deff needs to be wider on top cause it looks like an i
     
  10. Nine9

    Nine9 Senior Member

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  11. pikser

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  12. sacwacko

    sacwacko Elite Member

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  13. zeno

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    nice sacwacko, i like the upper one the most, the subtile shading is awesome, the shading on the last one is a bit much maybe... this way its kinda weird... maybe its just the size though
    you gotta buy some new markers too lol
     
  14. ATE

    ATE Senior Member

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    ai277.photobucket.com_albums_kk54_zomada_ate_1.jpg kinda fucked up on proportions and the "e" is fucking wack. didnt turn out as well as my other sketches...unfotunatly my other sketches are shitty :D:D:D
    zeno- work on your 3D
    mr yarbles- work on the "t" there a bitch arnt they :D:D
     
  15. AcosOne

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    pikser, the letters are not consistent in shape and structure, try sketching it with the bar method, it really works
    sacwaco, dope throwies man i like em a lot!
    ATE, try that same thing^ to get your letters in proportion, try to keep the "strokes" the same shape and thickness, it will help

    ok my thingy
    ai26.tinypic.com_1znwkle.jpg
    what do you guys think?
    crits please.
     
  16. Mr yarbles

    Mr yarbles Elite Member

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    ai26.tinypic.com_9u3dd4.jpg
    I've been trying to work on the t

    Ate the t kinda kills the flow to me for some reason and it's too big
    and yeah
    T's are a bitch.

    Acos that style's fresh
    But the a kinda loks like a b to me
     
  17. atlok7

    atlok7 Elite Member

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    trest- i like them, except for that little vertical line at the end of the horizontal line in the E. if you loose that it would b perty solid. just my thoughts

    ANY ONE PM ME IF YOU WANNA DO A THROW EXCHANGE
     
  18. griz

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  19. griz

    griz Member

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    I like it a lot but I'd like to see it without the indents in the A and O.
    -edit-
    actually i don't know, i'm looking at it again and i'm starting to like the indents. hahaha
     
    Last edited: May 28, 2008
  20. AZTEKA

    AZTEKA Senior Member

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