I was just saying this thread is looking rough... havent seen anything too good on the last page....i would crit yours but your picture isnt coming up on my comp...
Alrght thanks I did Here's a couple I kow I did the shadows wrong on the second one I was just practicing shadowing. Crits? Zeno Go simpler. evil I like it but the fill could be a bit better the orange coming through the blue is kinda distracting
kans straighten out the top of the a and the s cause that wavy line makes it look more toy than it has to be
Simple 9. Not really bubble style or a typical throwie etc.. but it works nice as a clean icon I can bang up. [Broken External Image]:http://img147.imageshack.us/img147/8365/dsc00635pk4.th.jpg
my throwie [Broken External Image]:http://i195.photobucket.com/albums/z146/tollieg08/Picture007.jpg crits
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nice sacwacko, i like the upper one the most, the subtile shading is awesome, the shading on the last one is a bit much maybe... this way its kinda weird... maybe its just the size though you gotta buy some new markers too lol
kinda fucked up on proportions and the "e" is fucking wack. didnt turn out as well as my other sketches...unfotunatly my other sketches are shitty zeno- work on your 3D mr yarbles- work on the "t" there a bitch arnt they
pikser, the letters are not consistent in shape and structure, try sketching it with the bar method, it really works sacwaco, dope throwies man i like em a lot! ATE, try that same thing^ to get your letters in proportion, try to keep the "strokes" the same shape and thickness, it will help ok my thingy what do you guys think? crits please.
I've been trying to work on the t Ate the t kinda kills the flow to me for some reason and it's too big and yeah T's are a bitch. Acos that style's fresh But the a kinda loks like a b to me
trest- i like them, except for that little vertical line at the end of the horizontal line in the E. if you loose that it would b perty solid. just my thoughts ANY ONE PM ME IF YOU WANNA DO A THROW EXCHANGE
My first throwie as griz: [Broken External Image]:http://rallytherobots.com/media/1/20080511-griz1.jpg It's changed a bit since then but feedback would be nice anyway
I like it a lot but I'd like to see it without the indents in the A and O. -edit- actually i don't know, i'm looking at it again and i'm starting to like the indents. hahaha
KASPER(KMK.AWA) [Broken External Image]:http://img232.imageshack.us/img232/5766/05205rc6.jpg JAG(KMK) [Broken External Image]:http://img260.imageshack.us/img260/2589/05204vk3.jpg [Broken External Image]:http://img527.imageshack.us/img527/7818/05206cs8.jpg RISK(KMK) [Broken External Image]:http://img206.imageshack.us/img206/6892/05203fk7.jpg