nukes-simples ar elooking descent but you hand style is fucking heariting man,kill the arrows and stop crunching everythign together just keep it simple man

 

work on your flow.. .if you don't know what that is... go to simps.

 

Mo152 - That G is mad hot but looks more evolved then the rest of ur letters try lettin the others keep up
Raze - aint feelin the curls and is way to sloppy
Nukes - try keepin em all the same height
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the sinn piece i had originally done the fill a year ago and left it at a friends found it tonight so fixed it and made it the best i could with it
crits?

 

crits?

 

critiques are welcome:

 

heres a crit.

GIVE EM TO GET EM BITCH!!

 

fuck with the second one and holla back

 

diggin the style of the first one clock

 

ill work on the flow and thanks for all the crits, first time i got more the 1 or 2.

louie, dont be a bitter, your bottom two are better then your first for sure but thats not saying much, you def need to work on more simple shit with the curvs not like the bottom 2 simples.

evasion it looks fresh i feel like its in space lol.

squid more simple.

 

your vermont "influence" is very clear.. you know what im talking about.

 

clock, your shit's dope man, im really feelin it. your C in your first sketch kinna looks like a 2 or a Z, depends on how you look at it.

wanted to add some colors. no markers, just spraycans.

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clock-for the first one stop with all that random shit coming out of no where that makes me want some koolaid...i say keep doing what you did in the last one

blocks for the crew.....idk why my dum ass made the letter so damn close but what ever

 

That R is hawt Jetty

 

thanks to all who responded. that was fast!
jetpack - very clean.. If i had to say anything it would be that the R and S vary in thickness more than the other letters. exchange?
smoothnuts - haha kool-aid... Like your stuff. reminds me of my favorite.. Dondi. exchange?

 

hmmmm i guess i be dow for an exchange....
but i must ask hows that remind you of dond,unless your talking about some of my other shit from pages back then i guess i could see that haha

 

nutty, that shit is just too blocky for me. not feelin the K at all either.

 

yeah i dont like that shit much either ah well i was just dicking around any way....
jetty,the a looks like it should be a bit taller,the extentions on the leg of the r and k ar wack you hsould just square off the end of the leg like you did with the left bar of the k...if that makes sence haha

 

to be honest, thats what i think looks better. but everyones sayin the leg shits look good.

 

naaaah you should most deff just suare off the edges....