what i mean is...that like the bars at ur DO! they are fat and cool..and at the first sketch its kinda skinny and not so good...cuz theres alot of space like flowing with nothing inside...make ur bars more fat...
umm its kinda the same just diff bending... 0.0.. try more smoother? like in the s make it more smoother and not like u broke the bars...well its just my opinion dunno XD
hey my 1st post on BS [Broken External Image]:http://img383.imageshack.us/img383/7271/bkssx6.jpg any crits? edit: my crits smooth_nuts: nice drawing i like the 2nd 'DO' style. reb: nice letters, maby try a nice fill-in?
amsterdam, biatch, i'm from holland too. well, don't do the rasta colours, it may be cool, but is doesn't add anything to the style and such. and make your lines a bit wider with less bends in it (but that's just my opinion) or make the overall thing a little bit less high, so it will be wider.
my one bump, im killin the hook on the top of the S for my next sketch/piece DO... me. i love that middle one nutty. keep it up. sear, just keep working at it. it'll come with time. do your own thing. but perfect the step your on before you try an move to the next step.
bump do my letters need any more work? clock i like it except for the n beks thicken up ur bars and do a new s in your handstyle
Blue..get rid of the extensions your U looks like an O you NK looks like a M with a line off it. and idk what you tried to do with the BG but loose it clock, thats fresh man.... real fresh.
well heres some shit i did just now... [Broken External Image]:http://img362.imageshack.us/img362/1835/1506080046oy2.jpg [Broken External Image]:http://img362.imageshack.us/img362/2615/1506080048qm6.jpg [Broken External Image]:http://img362.imageshack.us/img362/8301/1506080047fh8.jpg crits?
jup that first one is dope man, i like it. [Broken External Image]:http://img441.imageshack.us/img441/667/img00143zg5.jpg [Broken External Image]:http://img145.imageshack.us/my.php?image=img00143zh8.jpg
umm tnx? any crits? atlok...i think he writes BEKS... btw mo..i like the new style man...really feelin the P work it out
ayo smooth, what area are you in? someone near me writes the same thing as you , just wondering if mabey your the same person ive never seen a piece or throw by him just big handstyles that say DO!