busr- they're not horrible,i dont know why because in reality they're really quite toy, just use a dark outline for a light fill and vice versa and make your outline colour your drop shadow colour. use the b, u and s from the first one and the r from the second and for now just do a downwards line inside the b and r like: | if you dont know what i mean
this feels too smashed together to me. maybe spread the letters out, give them room. especially the M. the S needs some special attention, keep tweaking the lines till you find something that hopefully has style AND flow. easiest way to do that is to do your throw in your black book over and over and over, it will start to pick up some style.
Don't really have too much experience with throws any suggestions? busr if you're gonna go over someone I'd make it a filled throw instead of a hollow one Looks kinda wierd imo also you guys need to give some crits to get any.
i dont think your a is proportioned good..i would fix that line in the middle of your M as well but heres mine...i went over it like 20 times because i was frustrated trying to design a new throwie for my new name [Broken External Image]:http://i300.photobucket.com/albums/nn30/AiC-TN/throwies/cam.jpg
the two points on the top seems like its over doing it maybe you should round one of the tops and just have one point on the top per letter.
scanner fucked this one up big time, there was a 2 layer forcefeild [Broken External Image]:http://img206.imageshack.us/img206/7650/imgah1.jpg Hater-AiD~> - the j looks more like a s., and if you are going to dot the g i would dot the o and a as well Mr yarbles - too many points, round some edges
they could look a lot better though took advice..heres what i got ignore the aic at the top..i messed up on the shadow and tried to cover it up
dude, first of all, your double forcefield messing up should be the least of your worries. second of all, that looks more like a simple to me than a throw. throws are typically super quick, one or two colors. you need to work on your letter structure. start off simple, with bubble letters or block letters
im aware of what throwys should look like and how long they take, been there done that with the bubble/blocky throws.... was only saying the scanner fucked up the ff. right now ill list off things that annoy me about that sketch- proportion of the a and s, lack of curve on the i, width of the k midway.
[Broken External Image]:http://img169.imageshack.us/img169/3253/dsc02948eo1.th.jpg best pic of my throw
if its any condolence ive seen much worse. =] yeah man, take that, change it up, keep changin it, then eventually you'll have something your happy with. keep on keepin on
Wallace- I like it But you messed up when you treid to chage the A and the S just keep your letters the same. (bars) When doin a double force feild make sure the colors you use stand out bro. I dont do them Cause my color I have dont stand out.... Lol. [Broken External Image]:http://i219.photobucket.com/albums/cc194/DoubleM41/CYZTThowies.jpg Some Thowies Im workin on. CRITS?
hater aid - like it. looks good just not with squiggly lines. virus - your lines are too wavy i guess.. Shit camera.